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Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:44 am
Tigress says...



So. My title at the moment is The Gods Were Crying.
But, due to a bit of a plot change, the Gods AREN'T crying, so it really doesn't fit.

What do you think of these?:

Whispering Gods
The Gods Whispered
Tears of Eylasia

Any other suggestions? I feel like my head's gonna explode :shock:
  





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Sat Nov 08, 2008 6:38 am
danster724 says...



How bout "The Whispers of the Gods." or "Whisper of the Gods"
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:27 am
MidnightVampire says...



I feel very, extremely stupid for asking this but..... what's your NaNo about?
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Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:39 pm
Tigress says...



It's a sort of epic fantasy thingy, with several subplots. Basically,the Shadowgods and Godspirits are fighting for control of Eylasia (a realm), and are battling it out through control and manipulation of the people. SO yes, big war.

There's a godmarked woman, who has visions and is trying to figure out what they need, blah blah blah

I was thinking of WHISPERING GODS, because it suggests influence...
  





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Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:58 pm
Rydia says...



Why not go for something more symbolic and subtle? For example, 'Murmers in the Mountains'.
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:52 am
danster724 says...



Oooh mumers in the mountains. Illiteration!
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Sun Nov 09, 2008 8:54 pm
thunder_dude7 says...



It's aliteration.
  





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Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:29 pm
Angel of Death says...



Thunder that was such a random post.

Well anyways,

You should go with something that is not obvious. Trying using a line from a poem or using something that is poetic or a play on words.

The Gods Were Crying could easily be:

And then the Sky Cried

They Who Rained Sorrow

Tears Beyond Heaven

Something along those lines. I hope I helped,

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Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:34 pm
Silent music says...



Angel those are awesome! Hmmm.............how about "War between the worlds" :smt044 Just joking!

But seriously. What about......"The Tears That Stained" or "The Ever Changing Whisper"? :D I hope this helped!
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Mon Nov 10, 2008 5:47 am
Tigress says...



The Sky Bled?

And Then The Sky Cried (is awesome!!!)

Tears of Heaven



I also really really like They Who Rained Sorrow...
  





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Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:16 pm
miyaviloves says...



Hmm these are all sounding good, but you have to ask yoruself which one fits best with your story?

Hope your nano is going well!

(p.s. I like Kitty's idea - 'Murmers in the Mountains')

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