Young Writers Society

First sentences are always really important and even if you're planning to change the way you open your story post your first sentences in bold

For inspiration, I opened Maximum Ride by James Patterson and fell in love with the first sentence:

The funny thing about imminent death is that it really snaps everything into perspective.

Now, as for MY first sentence:

"I stepped out of the car, the gravel crunching beneath my feet, and followed mother into the familiar house."

Not as exciting but...what about you guys?


*night

Revenge is a dangerous dance, a tango for two.

The bodies lay frozen across the marble floor. A silvery glow hung in the air, which mingled with the overpowering stench of death.

Everyones sentences are so good!


The men lined up in front of the pit.


I think men is too strong of a word.... #_# I need to pull my backspace key off. XD

I 've only written 411 words today and I'm soooo tired of this story already. Hopefully I might get to the target.

“The sweat of the brow and the bread of our anxious toil, the result of a day's hard work and knowing that we are ourselves and we are free.” Thus spoke the great philosopher upon his deathbed.

>.>"

Trident, I like yours.

wow, everyone's first sentences are soo good

Her eyes were the same colour as overwhelming; the kind of thoughtful sharpness that sees everything.

It was exactly twenty four minutes past eleven at night.

Nothing special really...^^;

It was dark as Connie was passing the river.

:shrug: not too exciting.

I'll say as soon as I know... I'm writing random scenes from the middle because it's haaard to start a murder novel...

Darkness ruled her.

I have the urge to post my first 'chapter'/part/scene up here for edits....x.x

Time seemed to stand still.

A very easy sentence to start with...

First thing is the quote:
“Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another: What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C.S. Lewis

Then the first sentence:

Our parents all gave us Biblical names.

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Some of these are really good, you guys!