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NanoWriMo '07-First Sentences



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Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:24 pm
BigBadBear says...



"Trick or Treat!"

lol. As you can guess, it happens on Halloween night. Everyone's sentences are so good!

To read my prologue, go to my blog in my siggy!


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Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:41 pm
Alice says...



After living a hundred and forty two years in the body of a seventeen year old with a two hundred and eighty four year old in the body of a seventeen year old, Pen longed for more.

^.^ very long, yet not a run on!
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:59 pm
Crysi says...



When the Sindrykans came, everyone knew.

I honestly couldn't think of how to start, lol.

Not as good as the one I used last year, but then last year's was a dare...
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:26 pm
Caligula's Launderette says...



Regan blinked.

Exciting, ain't it?
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:48 pm
Lethero says...



In the early morning hours, a new life was being brought to the planet. In the town of Zeinta, Scado and Lethero were being born by their mother, Nicarga.

Not exactly one sentence, but that's basically how my prologue begins.
Last edited by Lethero on Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
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Integrity First
Service Before Self
Excellence In All We Do
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:49 pm
Evangelina says...



History began to change as the fifteen scrambled-looking people filed into the train depot, holding scarfs to their necks as a lazy wind rolled by.
Break the boundaries, hunt the hunter, and leave me a tip.
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Thu Nov 01, 2007 11:33 pm
Sam says...



I rambled about quotes in my El Jay, so I'll spare you:

William was eating lunch when he died.

I love NaNo. XD When else would this be acceptable...? Never, that's when.

EDIT: For D-

"May I take your order?"
Last edited by Sam on Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:13 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:18 am
chocoholic says...



Dear Diary.

Boring, I know, so here's the next bit.

I got my science test back today.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*
  





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Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:31 am
Gadi. says...



Smaur, Suzanne--- wow. Just...wow.

The sidewalk is splattered with a cat’s body, still fresh days after the accident.

It is basically nothing about the story, just an entrance to the setting.

The first sentence of real story is “It’s a wonder how cats move from life to life so fast,” Neta told her grandson.
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away
  





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Fri Nov 02, 2007 12:39 am
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Sam, I love yours! XD So randomly funny! (although I'm sure it's not so random once you get into the story... *shuts up*)

I'm not taking part this year myself, but I'm content to watch from a distance, and provide moral support to those who need it!
There's always been a lot of tension between Lois and me, and it's not so much that I want to kill her, it's just, I want her to not be alive anymore.

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Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:40 am
Flemzo says...



I feel like a loser...

The sun rose over the hills of Sparkston, a small town in the Midwest.
  





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Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:46 am
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Mine's not all that spectacular.

On a hill beside a shimmering lake, there stands a manor.
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:58 am
Areida says...



I like yours, WD. It sort of lulls me into wanting to listen, with just a few words.

Sambo... you are, of course, my hero. XD
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 3:44 am
Teague says...



"Is it on?"

In all its fantastically wonderful three-word speechy glory!

...Speechy? O.o
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Fri Nov 02, 2007 4:16 am
Evangelina says...



Hahaha. The best three word liner EVER!
Break the boundaries, hunt the hunter, and leave me a tip.
----to kill or not to kill
  








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