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Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:31 am
deleted12 says...



Sooo...tell me what your favorite emotion to write about it is, and I'll write a poem for you....k? (And I don't write romance poems, sorry everyone but no can do) :smt002 Will that work? :D One at a time plz...;)Oh and I love getting requests (That's just what I call people giving their favorite emotion for a poem) but I need time to write the poems and to catch up, OK? Sounds good? :D Thanks!
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Sat Jun 08, 2013 2:37 am
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Sadness, but there is always some light happiness in the inbetween and in the end :)
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That last glimmer of hope you get in the face of an unbeatable foe.
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DeadPeter says...



It's very fun to write as a character who's emotionless, as that way you can't put you're personal feelings into that characters mind.
or something to that extent.
  





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maleficent says...



Probably love, I love, love!
I find it to be a woundrous thing, writing about two characters falling in love slowly, overcoming different obstacles. I think the struggle is what attracts me the most, moments where it could go either way; especially when you're the one orchestrating it.

Either that or I just like controlling my characters like little puppets.
^^,
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Sat Jun 08, 2013 5:00 am
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So, first off: This sadness poem! (Requested by AlfredSymon) ;) I'm gonna try to do a quick poem off the top of my head, (haha) OK here it is:
Looking out into the stormy sea,
the wind throws harsh blows against your face,
as tears burn your skin by trickling out of your dark eyes.
Those eyes...
They used to be bright. So bright, and full of sparkling delight.
You miss it. How they used to be...how YOU used to be.
Many times you've tried-tried to get out of this cage of sadness
holding you in. Suddenly, you find, that what you need to do
is want it. You need to crave the joy that you once had
in the palms of your hands...if only you hadn't of thrown it away
in your depression and misery.
But, wait! It's not over...You can walk over and pick up your shinning
joy..yes, it may be stained slightly by tears, but nothing that won't
wash out. Looking out beyond the stormy sea, you see a sunrise!
A beautiful one, not like any other one you have ever seen!
With gentle golden clouds and pink soft streaks floating and
swirling in the early morning sky it was amazing...and the wind had went into a serene breeze which smelled of spring and would whisper funny little songs into your ear-
just like happiness. The happiness that you could have. That you will have.
The darkness is faded from your eyes and is replaced by shimmering
joy. The world has awoke,started a new day, and so have you.
-The End! Hope you all like it! -Neon.
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Sat Jun 08, 2013 5:05 am
deleted12 says...



Hi Maleifacent!
Sorry, but I don't really write love poems...:(
Soo..you could choose another emotion! ;)
Thanks! -Neon.
  





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Sat Jun 08, 2013 11:39 pm
LadyPurple says...



Guilt and anger. They are such fun emotions to write about!
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Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:19 am
speakerskat says...



Romance and tradgey usually, I'm not sure why they just .....they are just interesting :)
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Sun Jun 09, 2013 1:25 am
Dragonette says...



Anger, hopelessness.
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BadNarrator says...



an emotionless character isn't a character at all, it's a prop. anger and love? too grandiose and universally vague to be compelling. and hopelessness. hopelessness? it's difficult enough to care about a real person who's doesn't care about himself. why then should anybody give a damn about a fictional character who's given up on life?

my friend, if you want a pen-worthy emotion look no further than indignation, the feeling of moral repulsion. indignation is one of my favorite emotions to write about, especially when you mix in a little impotency for good measure, because it instantly puts characters at odds with each other. it inspires schoolyard fistfights and bar-room brawls. it's at the heart of every heartrending break-up and every crime of passion. indignation shatters political alliances, ruins marriages, turns brother against brother and occasionally sets a nation at war with itself.

the most interesting people, both real and imaginary, are the ones who perceive themselves as being on a higher moral standing than the people around them. their perception of themselves as being too good for this sinful earth turns them into emotional powder kegs. characters like these are magnets for tension. they come prepackaged with character flaws and compelling back stories. one of the best ways to establish conflict in a story is to take characters like these and put them in a situation in which they feel utterly repulsed. depending on the situation these characters make the most hilarious of comedies or the heart wrenching of tragedies. either way they are always the driving force in whatever story they happen to be in.
First you will awake in disbelief, then
in sadness and grief and when you wake
the last time, the forest you've been
looking for will turn out to be
right in the middle of your chest.
  





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Sun Jun 09, 2013 9:47 pm
OliveDreams says...



Anger, that's always fun.
And that one little moment after your character has given everything that they could possibly give and now the only word they can think of is no longer attack: it's protection.
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Wed Jun 12, 2013 6:57 am
Idrinkink says...



Well, For me I mostly write poetry about loneliness as the words flow well. As far as writing is concerned I write about Happiness and like being descriptive mostly. C:
  





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Wed Jun 12, 2013 7:14 am
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I mostly write about dark things that have real meaning in the world
I plan to show some enlightenment to this world of darkness and light through my literary works. Through darkness to light or hatred to love. My literary works will express them all with an elegant flow. My passion for writing grows with each breath.
  





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Wed Jun 12, 2013 9:24 am
Snoink says...



Joy! Write me a joyful poem that makes me want to dance!
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