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Haiku Battle



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Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:47 am
Lumi says...



(such a mod party in here, guys)

In bushels, in groves,
the wildberries grow plump
and lush in springtime.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:49 am
Button says...



Come summer, they fall
into the hands of the young
and are soon consumed.

(Yeah... maybe a bit.)
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:52 am
Lumi says...



Consumed, converted,
ordained a new life cycle
like cubs in the dawn.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:00 am
Button says...



But the bears slumber,
the time of wildberries gone,
and the ground is cold.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:06 am
Jagged says...



The cypress stands tall
and alone. We buried you
here. The roots are warm.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:11 am
Button says...



There are pulses
from below, songs of someone
who has passed from us.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:21 am
lilymoore says...



Dancing through veils
that sigh with moonlight breezes
calling out for blood.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:06 am
PenguinAttack says...



Heartless sun grinning
like Loki in summer breeze,
sees us burning still.

For Lumez.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:29 am
Jagged says...



In the dark we see
little of the path. But quiet!
Here are fireflies.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:41 am
Button says...



Ragnarok bloomed in
summer; the sun fell closer,
and burnt up the earth.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:51 am
Jagged says...



Fenris' tongue was
rough, Tyr; his fangs were sharper
around your thin wrist.
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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:55 am
PenguinAttack says...



I can hear the heart
beat between your chest and mine.
And this will end us.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 8:56 am
Button says...



And Jormungandr
spat bitter blood, releasing
Hel with hate for Thor.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:05 am
Jagged says...



Perse, +9001 for Jormungandr.

The mistletoe grows
unassuming. Somewhere close
Loki laughs, and laughs.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:06 am
PenguinAttack says...



Breathe like simple ghosts;
howling winds of solitude
battering this light.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  








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