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Haiku Battle



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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:09 am
Button says...



Sleipnir whinnies as
the descent grows dark, and his
splayed legs fail him.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:15 am
Jagged says...



Truth comes on raven
wings. Nine days he hung; Wotan
knows something of pain.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:16 am
PenguinAttack says...



Your mother sat by
the smooth marble of your tomb
and wept for her son.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:18 am
Lumi says...



Red grace spilled from your
ruby lips as you spoke a soft
eulogy for me.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:24 am
Button says...



(I actually don't know Wotan O.o)

Sinmara stands bold;
with metal in her strong hands,
flames soon singe the world.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:30 am
PenguinAttack says...



Metal wrist cupped
in sleek green vine - we are the
vessel of nature.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:31 am
Jagged says...



Alternate name for Odin :P

The chariots spin.
Run on, horses of the sun;
Helios still burns on.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:39 am
PenguinAttack says...



Crippled, we are
loose ends to your love affair
with enlightenment.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:39 am
Button says...



(Ookay. Now I feel stupid. :))

Selene slumbered on,
as fire swept across the skies,
and awoke in tears.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:40 am
Lumi says...



Love feels like your first
cough; it's the apprehension
of pain that binds you.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:45 am
PenguinAttack says...



This heart obession
crawling in to sullen mirth,
we are juxaposed.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:05 am
Button says...



Convoluted thoughts,
a mess: the heart went whichway,
mind struggling after.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:45 am
Jagged says...



In the flight of birds,
in the dying light of sunset
are your names written.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:04 am
Button says...



With the curve of a
wing are your names whispered,
for the wind speaks truth.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:27 pm
lilymoore says...



Aeolus suffers
for the misdeads of thunder
tainting hurricanes.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  








If you want to tell people the truth, make them laugh, otherwise they'll kill you.
— Oscar Wilde