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avianwings47 says...



Legos

i’m made of legos;
you can tear me down
piece by piece
until i’ve built myself back up again.



Spoiler! :
Uhhhh no, I did not just spend ten minutes researching if I could legally use the word "legos" in this poem. What are you talking about?
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Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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