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Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever



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Tue Jun 01, 2010 12:49 am
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Razcoon says...



Once upon a time there was a pretty girl.
Ideas don't stay in heads very long because they don't like solitary confinement.
  





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Tue Jun 01, 2010 1:00 am
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Elinor says...



The sky was filled with misshapen bits of white gas pinned neatly to the icy-blue background, creating a wonderful image that shown down to the spikes of forest-green grass below, on which sat a girl with raven hair named Alanna Jennifer Melissa Jessie Lillian Rae who was crying because no one in her family understood her or could ever learn to.

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

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Thu Jun 03, 2010 7:26 pm
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Razcoon says...



Hi.
Ideas don't stay in heads very long because they don't like solitary confinement.
  





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Mon Jun 21, 2010 6:27 am
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mikedb1492 says...



Welcome to my story, where I will simply copy and paste the Twilight saga over... and over... and over.
Last edited by mikedb1492 on Tue Jun 22, 2010 5:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Trying to get to heaven without Jesus is like climbing to the summit of Mount Everest naked. You die before it happens.
  





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Mon Jun 21, 2010 5:44 pm
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Lauren2010 says...



This is a story that I wrote.
Got YWS?
  





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Thu Jun 24, 2010 4:33 pm
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ShelraofWaral says...



Once upon a time, there was a gorgeous princess residing in a tiny wicked chamber in a huge castle. Her name was Cantella. That gorgeous, beautiful princess had unruly hair, dark black scarred skin, ravageful eyes and voice even hoarser than a donkey. This gorgeous princess met her destiney when she entered the wedding hall in her X-large pure white wedding dress arm in arm with Prince Alarming. They had a happy life afterwards.
The End.
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Steven Covey "

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Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:35 pm
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"Hello my name is Ebony-- sorry, ENOBY Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way - totally not related to Gerard Way, but I wish I was cause he's a major hottie."
... Unless it's a farm.
  





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Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:02 pm
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LadyPurple says...



Once there was bird that ate a worm.
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You're dealing with writers. The words "normal" and "usual occurrence" do not compute.
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Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:04 am
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hero says...



His fingers dug into her eye sockets like an eager kindergardener into a bowl of pudding.

((Don't ask.))
This guy is so evil you could put him in between two slices of bread and call him an evil sandwich.

Coming at you like a jetpack Shakespeare.

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Sat Jul 03, 2010 3:24 pm
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SporkPunk says...



"Hello my name is Ebony-- sorry, ENOBY Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way - totally not related to Gerard Way, but I wish I was cause he's a major hottie."


Win! :D

Here goes:

Call me Fahrvergnügen.
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Thu Jul 08, 2010 10:19 pm
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SnapesOnAPlane says...



Cdward Eullen was the hottest boy at Spoon Highschool.
But whether James really did take off Snape's pants, Harry never found out.
  





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Thu Jul 08, 2010 11:03 pm
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LadyPurple says...



A day like yesterday always needs to be remembered. That is because yesterday I officially did absolutely NOTHING! I will now ramble about the various distractions that may have thrown me off course of this achievement.
So hard I tried to resist my stabbing pain of hunger-- the book exploded.
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 4:19 am
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SnapesOnAPlane says...



Once upon an opening line, a noun verbed another noun.
But whether James really did take off Snape's pants, Harry never found out.
  





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Fri Jul 09, 2010 2:32 pm
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McMourning says...



I died.
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Fri Jul 09, 2010 6:39 pm
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SporkPunk says...



Sup.
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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