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Haiku Train



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Thu Dec 28, 2023 4:05 am
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herbalhour says...



"You will not be tamed."
They all say that but i know
I'm already tame.
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Thu Dec 28, 2023 8:03 am
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Liminality says...



I'm already tame:
the iguana in the leaves
keeping its distance.
she/her

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Thu Dec 28, 2023 2:26 pm
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Hijinks says...



keeping its distance
the horizon crawls away
perpetually.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Dec 28, 2023 4:15 pm
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herbalhour says...



perpetually
a life of sorrow and glee
i miss it dearly
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Sun Dec 31, 2023 12:08 am
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Spearmint says...



i miss it dearly.
if only i had my pen
the words would be free.
mint, she/her


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Wed Jan 03, 2024 3:03 pm
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Liminality says...



The words would be free
if not for ferns covering
the branches of trees.
she/her

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Wed Jan 03, 2024 3:46 pm
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IcyFlame says...



the branches of trees
sway gently in the breeze
a song without words.
  





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Wed Jan 03, 2024 4:39 pm
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herbalhour says...



a song without words,
just murmurs and whispers that
ring out in silence
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

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Wed Jan 03, 2024 4:54 pm
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Spearmint says...



ring out in silence
two bells of cold, solemn stone
in mossy ruins
mint, she/her


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Wed Jan 03, 2024 5:12 pm
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IcyFlame says...



in mossy ruins
a forgotten history
waits to be unearthed
  





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Wed Jan 03, 2024 6:29 pm
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herbalhour says...



waits to be unearthed
each day leaves, as i pass away
a lonely corpse
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

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Thu Jan 04, 2024 1:23 pm
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DeadMenTe11N0Tales says...



A lonely corpse
Never to be seen in daylight
Rotting all alone
(You can call me Raven or Grim if you want)

Remember, until we meet again,

“Never trust anyone who has not brought a book with them.”― Lemony Snicket


This is DeadMenTe11N0Tales, signing off
  





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Thu Jan 04, 2024 1:25 pm
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Liminality says...



Rotting all alone,
skin of unripe rambutan
wind-blown and storm-drenched.
she/her

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Thu Jan 04, 2024 1:43 pm
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Ventomology says...



Wind-blown and storm-drenched,
We batten down the hatches.
No shanties we sing.
"I've got dreams like you--no really!--just much less, touchy-feeley.
They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Thu Jan 04, 2024 5:29 pm
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Spearmint says...



no shanties we sing.
our adventuring days are
only legends now.
mint, she/her


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"There is nothing to fear from someone who shouts."
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart