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Haiku Train



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Thu Jan 04, 2024 8:22 pm
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Valkyria says...



only legends now:
clouds cried; the wind was angry.
Struck by betrayal
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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Thu Jan 04, 2024 8:28 pm
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herbalhour says...



Spoiler! :
only legends now
it's remains of perfection
which we both chased


struck by betrayal,
my heart aches and cries but you,
you broke me again
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Thu Jan 04, 2024 9:05 pm
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Spearmint says...



you broke me again.
i don't have an extended
warranty. too bad.
mint, she/her


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=D
  





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Mon Jan 08, 2024 4:45 pm
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Valkyria says...



warranty. too bad
stop knocking on my door and
let me hide away.
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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Mon Jan 08, 2024 4:48 pm
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herbalhour says...



let me hide away,
like bears in hibernation
i too am resting
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Tue Jan 09, 2024 5:15 am
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Spearmint says...



i too am resting.
a good day's work. but is there
something i forgot?
mint, she/her


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Tue Jan 09, 2024 3:09 pm
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Valkyria says...



Something I forgot?
No. Never your face or lips--
everlasting love.
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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Tue Jan 09, 2024 3:40 pm
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herbalhour says...



everlasting love,
yet you made it fine dust
it is now powder
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Tue Jan 09, 2024 9:32 pm
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Plume says...



it is now powder
that dusts your nose, not the marks
from my red lipstick.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Fri Jan 12, 2024 7:18 am
Spearmint says...



from my red lipstick
to your beat-up blue high heels
we make a fine pair
mint, she/her


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Fri Jan 12, 2024 10:42 am
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herbalhour says...



we make a fine pair
like wine and cheese we go well
together forever
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Sat Jan 13, 2024 11:08 pm
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Liminality says...



Together forever,
dawn's streak and the horizon --
only till midday.
she/her

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Sat Jan 13, 2024 11:35 pm
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herbalhour says...



only till midday,
shall i be alive but you
will not remember
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Sun Jan 14, 2024 5:23 am
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alliyah says...



We'll not remember
the words exchanged today, but
maybe the sunrise?
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Jan 14, 2024 9:46 am
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Liminality says...



Maybe the sunrise
and the moon will both appear --
the moment of dawn.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  








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