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Thu Apr 23, 2009 5:21 am
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"D-did somebody say demon?" -Drunk Demetrius

"Ugh! Your breath stinks!" -Maribelle plugging her nose

"I....I'm a demon. Right outta hell, heh heh." *hiccup* -Drunk Demetrius

"Lord almighty i hate it when you do this." -Maribelle

"You...Y-you just don't understand me...stupid angel" *swears under his breath* -Drunk Demetrius

"You know, your really hea-" *Demetrius falls unconsciously onto her* -Maribelle

"Awwe man. Well, nothing better to do now. Then sleep." *falls into an uncomfortable sleep* -Maribelle
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Tue Apr 28, 2009 9:17 pm
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Marc: "Angels and demons and drunken stupors, oh my!"

Vanessa: "The world is a strange place."

Marc: "It's even stranger when your book's being edited FOR THE FIFTH TIME."

lyrical_sunshine: "Sorry."
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

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Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:30 am
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"Only five times? You've had it easy, believe me." ~Anna

"I'm not sure how many times our story has been edited now. It seems like fifty." ~Jack

"It's twelve, and yes, it has taken two years." ~Anna *exasperatedly*

"Hear that, Author? Two years. Don't you think it's time to get a life?" ~Jack *to the author, me*

"Are you trying to tell me that writing you is not having a life? Ungrateful thing!" ~Me (author)

"No, we're not ungrateful, we were just thinking, for the good of us all, that you write a little less." ~Anna *hurriedly*

"Oh, well, maybe I should just write you out. Would that be less enough for you?" ~Me

"We take it back." ~Jack "Write on."

*to myself* "Sheesh, who's running this thing, anyway; me, or them?" ~Me

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Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:51 am
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Marc: "So who's crazier - the characters who are talking to the author, or the author who is talking to the characters?"
“We’re still here,” he says, his voice cold, his hands shaking. “We know how to be invisible, how to play dead. But at the end of the day, we are still here.” ~Dax

Teacher: "What do we do with adjectives in Spanish?"
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"Why do any of them have to be crazy?" ~Jason
"Tv makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Sat Sep 12, 2009 4:48 am
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But the whole world's crazy, isn't it? -Nova




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Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:23 pm
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"Nah. The whole world's too normal and boring if you ask me. Could take a bit more spicing up, don't you think?"
-Tom
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My pet
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And try to forget!

-Sweeney Todd

I'm a damsel...
I'm in distress...
I can handle it.
Have a nice day.

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Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:54 pm
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Ew, no, spices are nasty. Like basil. Sick. Even the name sounds weird, doesn't it? Basil. Basil. Basil. Disgusting.

- Jas
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Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:19 pm
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"Surely normal is subjective? My normal may not be your normal, his normal sure ain't hers, and Life Rocks, Actually." ~the Raven

"In your opinion, of course." ~Fal.

"No, it really does. Rock, that is." ~the Raven

"Which normal? There are several, you know." ~Perfect Woman

"They must mean the other normal. After all, our normal is perfection." ~Perfect Man

"I don't think you really can clump the whole world into one word like "crazy" or "normal". I mean, it's the world. It's too big." ~Heron
"Tv makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:52 pm
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"Well, this has been lovely an' all, but I don't think I can follow along with any more conversations like *that*." -Tom

"Scupper off, Tom, I think the Heron fellow had a point. World's too big for one little word."-Anna.

"Psh. I've seen the world. It ain't that big. I heard someone made it around in eighty days."-Tom
The history of the world
My pet
Is learn forgiveness
And try to forget!

-Sweeney Todd

I'm a damsel...
I'm in distress...
I can handle it.
Have a nice day.

-Hercules

Masquerade!
Paper faces on parade
Masquerade
Hide your face so the world can never find you.

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Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:32 am
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"Really? Only eighty days! Fascinating, maybe I should make that the subject of my newest research paper. Whether it's conceivable for the world to have been created in such a short period of time..." ~Professor Izald

"Tch, that's impossible. It takes millions of years to create a world. Plate tectonics or something like that, it's all in Father's books." ~Darian

"Oh? And have you ever entertained the possibility that your father might have been wrong, Lord Darian?" ~Masudo

"It wasn't just him. It's in every book--and what are you doing here anyway? I thought you were wandering the stars or whatever it is you were up to for the past two years." ~Darian

"I can't drop in to say hello?" ~Masudo

"Fareon! Are they saying anything treasonous?" ~The Savage King

"...as far as I can tell, no, my liege." ~Fareon
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Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:13 pm
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“So, what’s your name?” - Lily

“Xavier, but my friends call me Xav." - Xavier

“All right then, Xavier--it’s an interesting name, I’ll give it that. Does it mean ‘not good at first impressions’ in some other language?” - Lily

“No, it, um… uhh… Lily, I have to tell you something.” - Xavier

“The feeling is not mutual.” - Lily

“No! I’m not in love with you! It’s something else!” - Xavier

“Oh really? I doubt that. This happens to me at every school I go to.” - Lily
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"Ooh, a drama unfolding? Move over, Anna, I want a good view when the fight breaks out." -Tom

"If a fight breaks out, I'm getting out of here before someone comes and arrests me again. Or worse, arrests you, 'cause they you expect me to come break you out..." - Anna

"There won't be...fighting, will there?" - Joe
The history of the world
My pet
Is learn forgiveness
And try to forget!

-Sweeney Todd

I'm a damsel...
I'm in distress...
I can handle it.
Have a nice day.

-Hercules

Masquerade!
Paper faces on parade
Masquerade
Hide your face so the world can never find you.

-The Phantom of the Opera




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Sat Sep 19, 2009 2:50 am
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"Oh a fight, can I get in this? I haven't punched anybody human in a long time."-Asha
"Psh, who do you think you're gonna hurt, little girl? A leprechaun maybe?"-Stawrm
"She's really not that short. You're just abnormally tall."-Rayne
"Don't hate on her smallness. I'm gonna kick you to the next island if you talk about my little sister again." Aiden said with balled up fists.
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Mon Sep 21, 2009 1:35 pm
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"Fight all you want, just stay off my territory! And don't try and get attention from the master or I will rip off your head!" - Tugga (dog)
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