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Sun Jun 13, 2010 2:28 pm
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Ranger Hawk says...



Hm, well at first I thought it was a James Bond fanfic, but then I saw the "my" in front of it, so then I'd think it was some historical fiction...I think it'd really depend on the cover art, too. :)

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Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:33 am
SnapesOnAPlane says...



Sounds like the title to a fantasy novel, with a male protagonist.

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Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:45 am
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Rosey Unicorn says...



A romance. I will not say anything more because, *cough* yeah.

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Mon Jun 21, 2010 5:51 am
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mikedb1492 says...



Well, with that title I immediately think this will appeal more to girls than anybody else. If I had to guess its plot, I would say something along the lines of a girl tentatively moving forward in life through whatever challenges come her way. I figure it's going to take place in modern times and not in some fanciful world. Not fantasy or sci fi. Just normal.
Overall the title is curious at the very least, and I would definitely take it from a shelf simply to see what its about. In other words, pretty good.

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Thu Jun 24, 2010 8:53 pm
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Wariofart says...



I'd guess it was about a modern day person who is sent to the garden of Eden. Or maybe a re-imaging of the classic tale of the garden of Eden. It gets my attention at least.

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Mon Jul 05, 2010 12:13 pm
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Twit says...



A teen fiction story about a teenager whose life goes skewiff. It doesn't really say that much, other that something bad'll happen. It's not that interesting, and I probably wouldn't pick it up.

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Mon Jul 05, 2010 12:23 pm
Skins says...



I've actually already read the first chapter, which was very good, so I'll base it on my first impressions when I first saw it. To me, it sounds like a pretty good one. I would have no idea what it's about though... I would guess that it's something in the fantasy genre though. I do think that you could come up with a better one though, especially considering I have an idea what it's about. :wink:

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Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:46 am
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Well, it definitely catches my attention! I'd guess it's about a blind person or an invisible person, and I'd probably read it.

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Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:34 pm
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ReisePiecey says...



It makes me think of the main character going through everyday life with those little petty problems that keep popping up. It also could be a romance novel about a guy/girl that meets a guy/girl at a coffee shop.

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Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:42 pm
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Lilicia says...



From that, I gather that the main character is a girl, and that, to escape a terrible situation, she relies on little things to make her happy.That's how I see it anyway...

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Sun Aug 08, 2010 11:25 pm
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FashionistState says...



Hmm...it's a very broad title. Perhaps a main character's job is to decide the fate of all that live. Or maybe they're a judge in a law court, if it's less fantasy-based.

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Mon Aug 16, 2010 7:53 pm
ultraviolet says...



I'd say it's about a girl who's always been a bit different. People in her life make fun of her and no one truly understands her. Perhaps she tries to be normal for a while, but in the end realizes that being different is a good thing and no longer strives for normality.

Though, this is simply a poor guess. The title itself lends enough curiosity and open-ended-ness that I would pick it up and look at it.

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Mon Aug 16, 2010 8:11 pm
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Jetpack says...



It makes me think irrevocably of Lord of the Rings fanfic, but I'd assume it's fantasy and about some magical rings. Unfortunately, that's mainly because that's what LOTR is about. xD

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Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:50 am
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Ranger Hawk says...



Hmm...well it brings to mind both Seinfeld ("Serenity now!") and a type of romantic fiction about a girl finding peace after difficult relationships, with a swan on the cover.

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Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:52 am
mizz-iceberg says...



Makes me think of a fantasy story of a bunch of people with magical powers...or magic objects. They work together using their powers to overcome the adversity facing them. I like the title.

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