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Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:46 pm
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foxfire says...



i think i've seen similar titles like that before...
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Fri May 07, 2010 7:55 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Sounds adventurous. I'd pick that title up to have a look if I was at the library.

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Fri May 07, 2010 8:08 pm
Skins says...



Sounds quite interesting! I would definitely pick it up and take a look. My only problem is that using the word 'Wars' in a title can be a bit cliché.


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Fri May 07, 2010 8:25 pm
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I would definitely pick it up in a minute skins. Here's mines:

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Sun May 09, 2010 6:44 am
Lava says...



It sounds really interesting. I would think of it to be about some dead soul as a source of inspiration for some guy.

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Fri May 14, 2010 1:29 am
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ToritheMonster says...



sounds like a cheesy teenage romance, involving two star-crossed loves in winter.

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Fri May 14, 2010 2:36 pm
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Ranger Hawk says...



Hem haw, well it sounds like someone at court being tried for murder...not my first choice but definitely something I'd take a look at.

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Thu May 20, 2010 8:53 pm
Emerson says...



It reminds me (the title alone) a lot of The Exorcism of Emily Rose. Maybe something without the "The__of__" pattern would work better. :D

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Thu May 20, 2010 9:35 pm
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Rosey Unicorn says...



Completely dependent on the cover. At first glance, it looks like some romance-ish thing where there's going to be a sweeping adventure where the guy and girl hate each other but will eventually love each other. Troubled romance along the same lines as The Time Traveler's Wife.

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Sun May 23, 2010 6:30 am
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Lil_Pau says...



Sounds interesting. Either it's related to a real leopard or a war story.

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Sun May 23, 2010 8:25 pm
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Loller65 says...



Starverse U-Index eh?

Hm. I'd guess a comedic scifi adventure because of the "U-Index" part.





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Sun May 30, 2010 3:20 am
Emerson says...



Makes me think of dead baby jokes. :D I think I would fo' sho' read it!

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Sun May 30, 2010 3:31 am
Jagged says...



I'm trying to figure out if it's more likely to be a 'time is running out' or a 'time loop' type of story. I'm intrigued, either way.

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Sun May 30, 2010 3:32 am
Lil_Pau says...



Sounds interesting. I'd check it out.

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Mon May 31, 2010 12:16 pm
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austenite says...



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It would definately catch my eye in a bookstore, I'd want to pick it up and read the back first though, because it's a bit vague!

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