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Sat Jan 30, 2010 11:46 pm
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foxfire says...



i think i've seen similar titles like that before...
Our Reality: Land of Atonement
John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me




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Fri May 07, 2010 7:55 pm
NYCnightowl007 says...



Sounds adventurous. I'd pick that title up to have a look if I was at the library.

What about Cello Wars?
"I’m usually that guy who violently kicks off his shoes at the front door because there’s something about fake wooden kitchen linoleum that appears inviting to the feverish socked footsies." - Adam Young/Owl City




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Fri May 07, 2010 8:08 pm
Skins says...



Sounds quite interesting! I would definitely pick it up and take a look. My only problem is that using the word 'Wars' in a title can be a bit cliché.


Mine is ~ The Beauty in Ugly
Cat.




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Fri May 07, 2010 8:25 pm
curiousvampire says...



I would definitely pick it up in a minute skins. Here's mines:

Victoria, My Muse
"I became insane,with long intervals of horrible insanity."

"Their ideology is that human nature is fundamentally evil.In other words, humans are evil from the day they are born."

"Human is beatiful. Perfect is boring."




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Sun May 09, 2010 6:44 am
Lava says...



It sounds really interesting. I would think of it to be about some dead soul as a source of inspiration for some guy.

Kiss of a snowflake
GO ON. I DARE YOU TO CLICK!
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Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement

sachi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.





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Fri May 14, 2010 1:29 am
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ToritheMonster says...



sounds like a cheesy teenage romance, involving two star-crossed loves in winter.

"Trials of Death"
They call it a Royale with cheese.




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Fri May 14, 2010 2:36 pm
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Ranger Hawk says...



Hem haw, well it sounds like someone at court being tried for murder...not my first choice but definitely something I'd take a look at.

The Haunting of Elly Rose (it's actually a short short based on a nightmare that I've debated posting on here)
There are two kinds of folks who sit around thinking about how to kill people:
psychopaths and mystery writers.
I'm the kind that pays better.
~Rick Castle




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Thu May 20, 2010 8:53 pm
Emerson says...



It reminds me (the title alone) a lot of The Exorcism of Emily Rose. Maybe something without the "The__of__" pattern would work better. :D

It Needs Time
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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Thu May 20, 2010 9:35 pm
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Rosey Unicorn says...



Completely dependent on the cover. At first glance, it looks like some romance-ish thing where there's going to be a sweeping adventure where the guy and girl hate each other but will eventually love each other. Troubled romance along the same lines as The Time Traveler's Wife.

Leopard's Roar
You know you're a writer when you're not alarmed at hearing voices in your head, you can't read a book without analyzing it for plot & characters and you consider something you nearly killed yourself to write the most rewarding.

Guilty as charged.




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Sun May 23, 2010 6:30 am
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Lil_Pau says...



Sounds interesting. Either it's related to a real leopard or a war story.

Starverse U-Index
Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.




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Sun May 23, 2010 8:25 pm
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Loller65 says...



Starverse U-Index eh?

Hm. I'd guess a comedic scifi adventure because of the "U-Index" part.





Exploding Babies (the actual name of a comic I'm making)
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."


-Leon Trotsky-




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Sun May 30, 2010 3:20 am
Emerson says...



Makes me think of dead baby jokes. :D I think I would fo' sho' read it!

Question of Time
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.”
― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo




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Sun May 30, 2010 3:31 am
Jagged says...



I'm trying to figure out if it's more likely to be a 'time is running out' or a 'time loop' type of story. I'm intrigued, either way.

Squaring the Circle
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Sun May 30, 2010 3:32 am
Lil_Pau says...



Sounds interesting. I'd check it out.

Sisterhood
Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.




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Mon May 31, 2010 12:16 pm
austenite says...



Sisterhood


It would definately catch my eye in a bookstore, I'd want to pick it up and read the back first though, because it's a bit vague!

My Name is My Bond
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde