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Mon Jan 18, 2010 7:31 am
AeRY says...



It brings to mind a drama, to be honest. Makes me think of an Oriental royal family with sabotage and all the juicy stuff you get with princes and princesses. It's still sort of vague.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:59 am
cosby says...



This brings to mind something hidden in the book. It doesn't make me think about what the story would be about, instead, it makes me think: The cover might not look that good, but I think there could be an amazing something hidden in there somewhere.
Makes me think of Inkheart (the film) for some reason.

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Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:24 pm
Scion of Fangor says...



Probably some Sci-Fi to do with an alien invasion, or a story with germ warfare and it's effects etc. Lots of lasers and awesome explosions and obviously some genetically enhance warriors or robots.

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Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:30 pm
cosby says...



Um... makes me think of, well, war. Very chaotic, lots of guns, explosions, big bangs... makes me think of Immortal Engines by Philip Reeves.

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Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:22 pm
Rosendorn says...



I'm split on that title. On one hand, it's unusual (why have a title that's about something pretty?) but on the other, I don't see a hint of conflict that would make me pick the story up. Maybe if I was going slowly in the bookstore I'd look at it, but I don't think I would at any other time.

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Sat Jan 23, 2010 4:30 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Hmm, well it sounds intriguing, although it also makes me think of jungle creatures. Depending on the cover art, I might pick it up.

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Sun Jan 24, 2010 1:55 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Hmm... 6/10. Sounds a bit outside my usual reading genres, but I'd read it if the coverart and synopsis were good.

Okay, so I don't know what this will be about, but I thought it sounded cool:

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Sun Jan 24, 2010 2:01 pm
sugarxsnow says...



...Sounds erotic? Teeheehee. :P


How about this?


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Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:56 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



I'd definitely check it out; very cool!

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Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:48 pm
pinkangel54123 says...



It seems like it would be unique. I would definetely read the back and maybe even the first chapter.

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Tue Jan 26, 2010 12:46 am
Krupp says...



So cryptic, it could be dangerous. I like it.

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Wed Jan 27, 2010 5:46 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Hm, sounds rather morbid and dark, I think it'd really depend on the cover artwork.

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Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:47 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Hm... sounds like a fantasy. 6/10. Doesn't sound that original, but I'd probably read it.

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Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:06 am
Conrad Rice says...



Sounds kind of bland. 3/10. Just cause I'd flip through it to see the good parts.

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Thu Jan 28, 2010 7:15 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



I'd definitely pick it up and skim through it; unique, simple, yet cool title, and it instantly brings to mind a cantering horse. :D

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