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Thu Feb 10, 2011 3:50 pm
lilymoore says...



On the range top stove,
the cracked tin kettle screeches
and steam melts her face.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Thu Feb 10, 2011 5:35 pm
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The water whistled,
pouring expectations of
peace and tea to air.
  





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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:04 am
Lumi says...



Tea, hot and thin, spilled
on the obituaries;
do you miss us?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:23 am
Button says...



Ink spread like death, and
we gasped as your name spilled out,
almost like a ghost.
  





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Mon Feb 14, 2011 9:12 am
Hannah says...



Plastic wrapped around
your delicate fingertips
reminds me of ash.
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:49 am
Lumi says...



Ash fell from your lips,
a phoenix in the twilight.
Your life is a pyre.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:54 am
Jagged says...



What more can I burn?
First were your letters to me,
and last was my heart.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:03 am
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Snoink says...



Carbon dioxide
rises from the flickerings
of a dying flame
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach

Moth and Myth <- My comic! :D
  





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 3:36 pm
Button says...



Embers flared up, but
died under my glare; you weren't
to be remembered.
  





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:20 pm
lilymoore says...



Memories raining
down on the fresh, upturned earth
you're sleeping under.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:02 am
earendil says...



Death's icy breath crawls
within your bones; silent eyes
are cold and lifeless.
  





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Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:04 am
Button says...



They were glass, hazy
and glazy and so far gone
from all that we had.
  





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Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:32 pm
Jagged says...



I watched the sails fade
behind the thick autumn mists.
The sea was silent.
Lumi: they stand no chance against the JAG SAFETY BLANKET
  





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Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:24 pm
danipower0204 says...



As the Winter warms,
So does my heart's bubbling love,
Beautous Spring step forth.
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:45 pm
Button says...



Nosy Neighbor rhymed,
crimed, and eventually
died; Loomy was cruel.
  








He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
— Friedrich Nietzsche