This story, fueled by waffles, intense brainstorming sessions, and
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Other side-affects of this story may be, but are not limited to: end to world hunger, world peace, vomiting, end to poverty, the cure for cancer, the cure for polio, the invention of time travel (we know that this part will work, because polio already has a cure, you see?), mild indigestion, explosive laughing fits, increased charisma and good looks, and even cash being dumped into custom stitched pockets by dump trucks. Please inform your doctor if you have thoughts of suicide, even if it is not caused by this forum. This storybook is not for everyone, so ask your doctor before joining. Just kidding, this storybook is for everyone.
Without, further ado, here is our story outline, in which we have invested a lot of planning:
The Plot:
History:
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On the year of 2015, the Sentients arrived to Earth. They descended from the heavens at a quick speed, hurtling towards the ground in a large rocket, landing in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, yet slowing down enough that it did not cause major damage to any coastline. Instantly recognizing that the massive satellite was not our own, Japan and the United States both raced to the ship with fleets of ships and airplanes. The US got there first, but it mattered not. The rocket was inhabited, by a human-like people, who were most definitely not human.
They claimed to have come from a planet in a completely different galaxy, and said that they came in peace. We welcomed them into society, calling them Sentients, because of their intense knowledge, that matched, and even in some cases exceeded our own. Although there were at first issues of spec-ism and prejudice, eventually humans and Sentients were able to live in harmony and a period of prosperity followed known as the Era or Prosper or the Second Pax Period.
During this period, the Sentients and humans worked together to create a very prosperous and peaceful world, using our combined knowledge and resources to advance technology to a previously unheard-of degree. The Sentients had increased knowledge of energy use and storage, the reason they were able to travel here, yet we had superior skills in mechanical engineering and elemental physics and chemistry, and together we created technology and other advancements that skyrocketed wealth and society to a whole new level. We lived in peace and well-being for more than 100 years, however, sometime all good things must come to an end.
Eventually the Sentients began to evolve. They became slowly and surely less human-resembling, showing abilities to transform their bodies by increased or decreased transfer of energy to various points. They became stronger than us, and smarter than us, showing obvious dominance in most areas. As their physical attributes increased, their egos ascended, and they began to be greedy of things that we had never fought over before. The Sentients took advantage of us as less superior beings by taking over our operations, our governments, our lives, through snide influence and threats. They assumed a higher status than humans, and eventually became king-like, trying to control us to the point of reducing our lives as favor to their own.
The last straw occurred when Sentients in Egypt began to shoot humans who showed "disrespect." We declared our protection in the "Second Rights of Man" document, and confronted the Sentient leaders in a massive protest in front of the massive UN Building in New York City, which had became the World Capital City during the Era of Prosper. In response, they gunned us down in the streets. War was immediate.
The early stages of the war were known as the Terror Campaign. During this time, Sentients went ballistic, murdering and torturing humans in a small genocide. We eventually lost our delusions of peace and began to mobilize our armies. The battle did not utilize Nuclear Weapons because the Humans and Sentients were so intermingled and integrated that there were no true targets. The war of Man vs. Alien lasted for over a decade, the first 6 years being the most bloody, the last being the humans who refused to surrender being wiped out. It was named the Motherland War or the Great War. In an early victory, we had stormed NYC and taken control of the UN building.
As time wore on, the humans hit a massive road-block. The Sentients were changing still, and in a bad way. They were evolving to be more destructive, more physically superior. And sometimes they transformed. They could, at will, turn into something so mysterious and horrifying that it is impossible to describe except for the words cold and dark. In this form, the Sentients could inspire much fear and destruction among their human enemies, and this caused the humans to lose ground, being defeated again and again, and losing more soldiers every second. Soon our weaponry was gone, our ammunition was gone, and for most of us, our pride was gone.
The final battle of the war was in 2151. All of the human army had accepted defeat and surrendered to the Sentients except for the battalion that was still in the heavily fortified NYC. We staged our final stand there, fighting back to the death against an onslaught of heavily armed Sentients. We fought long and hard, but eventually they made it to the UN Building, where we eventually were taken by force. No prisoners were taken. Every human who was caught inside the city died. This massacre encompassed more than 200,000 men, women, and children. Because of this final stand, it was known as the Battle of the Alamo, and that title eventually spread to refer to the whole war: The Alamo War. (This is an important rallying point for your humans in the story.)
The humans became demoralized in defeat and were subject to a mostly non-lethal genocide by the Sentients, who now overpowered them entirely. After the terror had subsided, the human race was enslaved by the Sentients. Humans now catered to the Sentients hand and foot, performing all tasks for them and doing all work for them. They worked in mines and on plantations, letting the Sentients reap the benefits of the raw goods, and worked in factories to manufacture products that the humans could not use. A large portion also became personal servants to the Sentients, who now lived in extreme wealth, while giving their slaves horrible living conditions. As the days wore on, more and more humans became agitated. However, in the early days of the enslavement, any form of rebellion was squashed.
The humans were beaten and trampled upon for the next 2 decades, and a new generation of humans began to take over the slave positions as many of their seniors died from disease and starvation. These young men and women were strong from work and very, very angry. Tensions built as they grew more and more hatred towards the Sentients, now entirely inhuman, looking more like flesh-like birds than people, growing steadily overweight, and the humans increasingly wanted, needed, a change in the status quo. There seemed to be a familiar trend rising out of the darkness. That of war.
They claimed to have come from a planet in a completely different galaxy, and said that they came in peace. We welcomed them into society, calling them Sentients, because of their intense knowledge, that matched, and even in some cases exceeded our own. Although there were at first issues of spec-ism and prejudice, eventually humans and Sentients were able to live in harmony and a period of prosperity followed known as the Era or Prosper or the Second Pax Period.
During this period, the Sentients and humans worked together to create a very prosperous and peaceful world, using our combined knowledge and resources to advance technology to a previously unheard-of degree. The Sentients had increased knowledge of energy use and storage, the reason they were able to travel here, yet we had superior skills in mechanical engineering and elemental physics and chemistry, and together we created technology and other advancements that skyrocketed wealth and society to a whole new level. We lived in peace and well-being for more than 100 years, however, sometime all good things must come to an end.
Eventually the Sentients began to evolve. They became slowly and surely less human-resembling, showing abilities to transform their bodies by increased or decreased transfer of energy to various points. They became stronger than us, and smarter than us, showing obvious dominance in most areas. As their physical attributes increased, their egos ascended, and they began to be greedy of things that we had never fought over before. The Sentients took advantage of us as less superior beings by taking over our operations, our governments, our lives, through snide influence and threats. They assumed a higher status than humans, and eventually became king-like, trying to control us to the point of reducing our lives as favor to their own.
The last straw occurred when Sentients in Egypt began to shoot humans who showed "disrespect." We declared our protection in the "Second Rights of Man" document, and confronted the Sentient leaders in a massive protest in front of the massive UN Building in New York City, which had became the World Capital City during the Era of Prosper. In response, they gunned us down in the streets. War was immediate.
The early stages of the war were known as the Terror Campaign. During this time, Sentients went ballistic, murdering and torturing humans in a small genocide. We eventually lost our delusions of peace and began to mobilize our armies. The battle did not utilize Nuclear Weapons because the Humans and Sentients were so intermingled and integrated that there were no true targets. The war of Man vs. Alien lasted for over a decade, the first 6 years being the most bloody, the last being the humans who refused to surrender being wiped out. It was named the Motherland War or the Great War. In an early victory, we had stormed NYC and taken control of the UN building.
As time wore on, the humans hit a massive road-block. The Sentients were changing still, and in a bad way. They were evolving to be more destructive, more physically superior. And sometimes they transformed. They could, at will, turn into something so mysterious and horrifying that it is impossible to describe except for the words cold and dark. In this form, the Sentients could inspire much fear and destruction among their human enemies, and this caused the humans to lose ground, being defeated again and again, and losing more soldiers every second. Soon our weaponry was gone, our ammunition was gone, and for most of us, our pride was gone.
The final battle of the war was in 2151. All of the human army had accepted defeat and surrendered to the Sentients except for the battalion that was still in the heavily fortified NYC. We staged our final stand there, fighting back to the death against an onslaught of heavily armed Sentients. We fought long and hard, but eventually they made it to the UN Building, where we eventually were taken by force. No prisoners were taken. Every human who was caught inside the city died. This massacre encompassed more than 200,000 men, women, and children. Because of this final stand, it was known as the Battle of the Alamo, and that title eventually spread to refer to the whole war: The Alamo War. (This is an important rallying point for your humans in the story.)
The humans became demoralized in defeat and were subject to a mostly non-lethal genocide by the Sentients, who now overpowered them entirely. After the terror had subsided, the human race was enslaved by the Sentients. Humans now catered to the Sentients hand and foot, performing all tasks for them and doing all work for them. They worked in mines and on plantations, letting the Sentients reap the benefits of the raw goods, and worked in factories to manufacture products that the humans could not use. A large portion also became personal servants to the Sentients, who now lived in extreme wealth, while giving their slaves horrible living conditions. As the days wore on, more and more humans became agitated. However, in the early days of the enslavement, any form of rebellion was squashed.
The humans were beaten and trampled upon for the next 2 decades, and a new generation of humans began to take over the slave positions as many of their seniors died from disease and starvation. These young men and women were strong from work and very, very angry. Tensions built as they grew more and more hatred towards the Sentients, now entirely inhuman, looking more like flesh-like birds than people, growing steadily overweight, and the humans increasingly wanted, needed, a change in the status quo. There seemed to be a familiar trend rising out of the darkness. That of war.
The story starts:
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The year is now 2176. After being enslaved since the Battle of the Alamo during the humans final stand in New York, the humans are now servants and workers, who can barely survive in addition to being treated brutally and cruelly by their Alien masters. The Sentients are becoming a little too comfortable in their positions of power though. Below them, the people are stirring, and stirring very hard. There are many tensions, and unbeknownst to the Sentients, the humans want retribution for their ancestors and parents lost in the Motherland War.
Meanwhile, the Sentient government grew corrupt and bureaucratic, and lazy along with it. Their most powerful base of operations was in the UN Building, which was now converted into a Sentient stronghold. In it lay the governing body of the alien race, and one of the largest battalions of Sentients anyone has ever seen. This will become the main objective for the human uprising, the target which mean the most, both practically and emotionally.
Your story will follow the humans as they grow from small uprisings into a huge rebellion, which will eventually turn into the Second Motherland War. Good luck and play fair. But not too fair. It's time to take back what's ours.
Meanwhile, the Sentient government grew corrupt and bureaucratic, and lazy along with it. Their most powerful base of operations was in the UN Building, which was now converted into a Sentient stronghold. In it lay the governing body of the alien race, and one of the largest battalions of Sentients anyone has ever seen. This will become the main objective for the human uprising, the target which mean the most, both practically and emotionally.
Your story will follow the humans as they grow from small uprisings into a huge rebellion, which will eventually turn into the Second Motherland War. Good luck and play fair. But not too fair. It's time to take back what's ours.
What has occurred thus far
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When the story dawned, we saw different ways in which the Sentients have been torturing and depriving the poor humans from executions to working persecution in the mines to domestic and sexual abuse. Several people have already decided to not deal with it anymore and have begun running away and fighting back.
Louis Defarge (CowLogic), after finding out that his wife's and Patrick Jamison's (ShadowVyper) brutal sentient slave master Drin has been conspiring against his fellow aliens to upset the status quo and wants Defarge to lead the rebellion, takes advantage of a sudden earthquake in the mines to kill his guards. He and Patrick were last seen meeting a strange Mudman who had been living in an underground bunker.
The 16 year old Marietta Leroy (AriaAdams) has been leading small children and runaway humans to their deaths and much worse for the benefit of her horrid master for a long time. She represents the "Uncle Tom" figure in the story. She has recently kidnapped Gulfie (janika), who is now under control of the brutal Yaksha.
Peter Sebastian Cloud (Alvarin) and his mentor, Gandalf's weird uncle Gregory (VeerenVKS) have been living life in the metaphircal fast lane, avoiding found by the Sentients and scrounging for food. Its a very cute little relationship.
Nya Rey (Starleene) has been living in the woods for the longest time, a runaway slave who is convinced that the dying words of her father were true, that there is a safe place out there called the "Haven." Unfortunately she has not found it yet, but after she met up with Robert Shay Tenet (BlackNether12) who had recently lost his sister in deadly combat with Sentients, his brother Jacob slaying them and going off to the woods, who wanted to send him to the mines, they did find a strange beast in the woods, known only as Experiment, a poor Sentient experimented on by the others.
Meanwhile, in the halls of the converted UN Building in NYC, a group of Mudmen, encased in a statue substance have been plotting a breakdown of the Sentients as well. Ao Mark'Zuul, primarily, has devised a method in which his Scientist (an almost mythical race now) skills can help upset the status quo.
All the while more and more tremors are occurring as some mystery force is pushing up through the ground. And with the device that Defarge is soon to find in the possession of the strange beast he meets underground seeming to be the answer to everything, we will see how the revolution rises up.
Louis Defarge (CowLogic), after finding out that his wife's and Patrick Jamison's (ShadowVyper) brutal sentient slave master Drin has been conspiring against his fellow aliens to upset the status quo and wants Defarge to lead the rebellion, takes advantage of a sudden earthquake in the mines to kill his guards. He and Patrick were last seen meeting a strange Mudman who had been living in an underground bunker.
The 16 year old Marietta Leroy (AriaAdams) has been leading small children and runaway humans to their deaths and much worse for the benefit of her horrid master for a long time. She represents the "Uncle Tom" figure in the story. She has recently kidnapped Gulfie (janika), who is now under control of the brutal Yaksha.
Peter Sebastian Cloud (Alvarin) and his mentor, Gandalf's weird uncle Gregory (VeerenVKS) have been living life in the metaphircal fast lane, avoiding found by the Sentients and scrounging for food. Its a very cute little relationship.
Nya Rey (Starleene) has been living in the woods for the longest time, a runaway slave who is convinced that the dying words of her father were true, that there is a safe place out there called the "Haven." Unfortunately she has not found it yet, but after she met up with Robert Shay Tenet (BlackNether12) who had recently lost his sister in deadly combat with Sentients, his brother Jacob slaying them and going off to the woods, who wanted to send him to the mines, they did find a strange beast in the woods, known only as Experiment, a poor Sentient experimented on by the others.
Meanwhile, in the halls of the converted UN Building in NYC, a group of Mudmen, encased in a statue substance have been plotting a breakdown of the Sentients as well. Ao Mark'Zuul, primarily, has devised a method in which his Scientist (an almost mythical race now) skills can help upset the status quo.
All the while more and more tremors are occurring as some mystery force is pushing up through the ground. And with the device that Defarge is soon to find in the possession of the strange beast he meets underground seeming to be the answer to everything, we will see how the revolution rises up.
Playable Species:
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Humans: You are a part of a dying race. After fighting multiple wars and losing most all of them, you are now enslaved. The willpower of you and your people have been diminished down to almost nothing. Working in the Mines of Algorath in Colorado, or the factories in what was Newark, NJ, and Detroit, MI, or serving the Sentients in their magnificent homes, your people are working away physically, mentally, and emotionally down to nothing. You shall be one of these people.
You are one of the only people left that have hope. It is your job to inspire that hope among your human brethren and to take up arms against the Sentients.
Note: We suggest that most of you pick humans. Just because they are not solid crystal statues for most of Season 1.
Note: Your person can have some kind of adaptations. It is recommended. Nothing too big, like a third arm, but something is wanted. (Always keep in mind that the main rallying point you work around is your humanity, which is adverse to the inhumanity of the Sentients. Therefore, your whole character should not be based around his or her "adaptation.")
Mudmen: You were the pride of the Sentients, called the Scientists, who were the most excelled in wisdom and knowledge. Some could even use complex math and science skill to use nature to harness energy in ways that some humans might call ''magic." Now you are the Mudmen.
Now, though, you are the pride and glory of the UN building. You are a crystal statue residing in the halls of the converted UN building. You cannot move, but you can think and feel. The only possible good thing about being a Mudman is that the crystal can and is storing vast amounts of energy, from both the environment and a bit from you.
Note: Please PM Omniyus if you want more information on this character. Omniyus will message if you pick this character.
You are one of the only people left that have hope. It is your job to inspire that hope among your human brethren and to take up arms against the Sentients.
Note: We suggest that most of you pick humans. Just because they are not solid crystal statues for most of Season 1.
Note: Your person can have some kind of adaptations. It is recommended. Nothing too big, like a third arm, but something is wanted. (Always keep in mind that the main rallying point you work around is your humanity, which is adverse to the inhumanity of the Sentients. Therefore, your whole character should not be based around his or her "adaptation.")
Mudmen: You were the pride of the Sentients, called the Scientists, who were the most excelled in wisdom and knowledge. Some could even use complex math and science skill to use nature to harness energy in ways that some humans might call ''magic." Now you are the Mudmen.
Now, though, you are the pride and glory of the UN building. You are a crystal statue residing in the halls of the converted UN building. You cannot move, but you can think and feel. The only possible good thing about being a Mudman is that the crystal can and is storing vast amounts of energy, from both the environment and a bit from you.
Note: Please PM Omniyus if you want more information on this character. Omniyus will message if you pick this character.
Other (non-playable) Species:
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Sentients: They now look much different than the humanoids that had once landed on earth with a heart-shaped box of chocolates.
The Sentients are now pale, fleshy, and birdlike. Although they are gaining weight, you can see through their skin somewhat and there are many varicose veins and arteries. They are very frightening to the human eye, especially when they transform into the Dark, their fear-inspiring state. They are bigger than humans, most standing at a lanky excess of 8 or more feet, and they have very long arms and fingers. They are crudely intelligent, yet speak in weird, horse, voices.
You cannot play these characters, but it is important to know what they look like in order to paint an accurate picture of your characters enslavement, display.
The Sentients are now pale, fleshy, and birdlike. Although they are gaining weight, you can see through their skin somewhat and there are many varicose veins and arteries. They are very frightening to the human eye, especially when they transform into the Dark, their fear-inspiring state. They are bigger than humans, most standing at a lanky excess of 8 or more feet, and they have very long arms and fingers. They are crudely intelligent, yet speak in weird, horse, voices.
You cannot play these characters, but it is important to know what they look like in order to paint an accurate picture of your characters enslavement, display.
Available Positions:
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Humans:
1. Reserved for @CowLogic
2. Reserved for @Starleene
3. Reserved for @Alvarin
4. Reserved for @BlackNether12
5. Reserved for @VeerenVKS
6. Reserved for @AriaAdams
7. Reserved for @ShadowVyper
8. Reserved for @Paracosm
9. Reserved for @Janika
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Mudmen: (I think we have enough. Shino still has the option though.)
1. Reserved for @Aquestioning
2. Reserved for @CowLogic
3. Reserved for @Starleene
4. Reserved for @BlackNether12
5. Reserved for @AriaAdams
1. Reserved for @CowLogic
2. Reserved for @Starleene
3. Reserved for @Alvarin
4. Reserved for @BlackNether12
5. Reserved for @VeerenVKS
6. Reserved for @AriaAdams
7. Reserved for @ShadowVyper
8. Reserved for @Paracosm
9. Reserved for @Janika
10.+
Mudmen: (I think we have enough. Shino still has the option though.)
1. Reserved for @Aquestioning
2. Reserved for @CowLogic
3. Reserved for @Starleene
4. Reserved for @BlackNether12
5. Reserved for @AriaAdams
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Rules:
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Usual YWS rules, including:
1.) Violence is not only plausible, it is inevitable. And it can get quite gory.
4.) Use your discretion for things such as sex and language.
7.) Try to make posts pretty good (grammar and length-wise).
10.) Please read the history and descriptions to make your posts well-informed. I know it's long, but... yeah.
23.) We won't be super strict, but no making your characters super-powered, no messing with others' characters unjustly, and no being a mean person.
45.) Omniyus and I have complete control over you in this SB. And rebellion is not an option.
1.) Violence is not only plausible, it is inevitable. And it can get quite gory.
4.) Use your discretion for things such as sex and language.
7.) Try to make posts pretty good (grammar and length-wise).
10.) Please read the history and descriptions to make your posts well-informed. I know it's long, but... yeah.
23.) We won't be super strict, but no making your characters super-powered, no messing with others' characters unjustly, and no being a mean person.
45.) Omniyus and I have complete control over you in this SB. And rebellion is not an option.
Only chapters may be posted here. Issues such as spot reservation questions and concerns should be posted on the Discussion Thread, or DT, located here: viewtopic.php?t=98029
Now, YWS users, will you join us to take back what is ours? It is time for a change of scenery in this great and revolutionary year of 2176!
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