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Sonic The Hedgehog: The Combined Chaos (accepting)



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Tue Feb 21, 2012 7:31 pm
SunshineandCarnage says...



(This is a storybook where any character, situation, ect. from any Sonic universe (the games, shows, Archie comics, Fleetway comics, even the manga) can be used. However there is a limited amount of OCs that will be allowed). Please P.M. your profiles to me for inspection and approval before posting them. Thank you!

The story: (takes place after Sonic X)
Sonic is finally enjoying a real vacation when a Eggman-powered thunderstorm zaps him and his friends into another world yet again. This isn't a world like his friend Chris Thorndyke's. This is a strange world called Loroki ruled by Queen Elizabeth Argot Partiskova whose rule is threatened by a corrupted exiled former king, her father-in-law Gregory Partiskova. The king of Loroki, Jericho Partiskova, is the world's angel-guardian, as a member of the mysterious Legion of Angels that balances good and evil within the universe, a sort of checks and balances mechanism. Sonic and his friends are taken in by Jon Benet, a chinchilla who claims relation to the king. He agrees to help the lost Sonic Team to find a way home before Eggman really destroyed everything, but only if they will help the present problem in Loroki. The Sonic Team agrees.

Meanwhile, rock-pop band The Angels, made of royal twins Alexandera "Alex" and Lorreigna "Rei Rei" Partiskova and their many friends, is performing in Station Square, their place of residence. Alex, the de facto leader, hears about the problem in the twins' birth planet and immediately cancels the rest of the concert despite fans' objections. Immediately, the entire band takes youngest Angel Jaqueline "Jackie" Stevens the raccoon's artificial portal to Loroki. Something malfunctions and the group is seperated. Alex finds Jackie and the two venture into the house cousin Oliver-Philip Partiskova, who goes by the pseudonym Jon Benet and is housing who could be the key to saving the universe.

But unbeknownst to both groups, Dr. Eggman and King Gregory have teamed up for a violent takeover like no one has ever known.

The profiles for the main characters are coming soon. This is the format:

Heroes:
Sonic The Hedgehog
Alex Partiskova
Jackie Stevens
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Villains:
Dr Eggman
Gregory of Loroki
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Neutral:
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Character Template:

Name:
Gender:
Species:
Age:
Appearance: (Images or description will work)
Personality:
History:
Abilities:
Why (do they choose the side that they do):
Love?:
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Wed Feb 22, 2012 2:24 pm
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Profile one: Alexandera Partiskova

Full name: Princess Ivanovna Aphrodite Alexander D'angel Challu Partiskova, duchess of Ariglasie

Alias: Alexandera Partiskova, Alex (the) Chinchilla

Species: Chinchilla (C. Lanigera)

Gender: female

Age: 19

Description: Alexandera is a tan-beige chinchilla with plush fur, erect ears, and fangs. She resembles Sally Acorn of the Archie world to a degree when Sally had long hair. Alexandera's, however, is wavy and mahogany to dark red with side swept bangs and a blue streak. Her tail is red as well. Her eyes are sepia to dark brown and framed with short brown lashes. She is covered from head to toe in freckles. Unlike many of the female characters, Alexandera has full body modesty with her personalized crop top with ALEXANDERA on it diagonally and black jeans with double belt and black boots. Her cheeks have black arrowhead stripes pointing down, which mysteriously appeared when she and her sister were seperated into two individuals. Rei Rei does not have the arrowhead stripes. (I have been told that my character looks like the animal form of Mean Girls era Lindsay Lohan, if that helps)

Personality: Alexandera is the leader of The Angels, a stringent strategist who is dedicated to whatever task she is handed. She is confident and snarky, with a quick-witted classically British personality. She speaks in a soft-spoken Liverpudlian Beatlesque accent mixed with American mannerisms. Even though she seems sweet and shy, she is calculating and in fact quite intelligent, perhaps the most intelligent character in the entire storybook. She is stubborn and willful to a fault as well as short tempered, but she also has an extremely kind and sweet nature. She is strictly disciplined emotionally and hates looking vulnerable. She is always polite to her elders, whether she likes them or not. A passionate lover of nature, she would like nothing more than to see the sights, but when there's a madman or two trying to take over the world, she will stop at nothing until they've been contained.

History: Alexandera is the daughter of the former King Gregory and former Queen and current guardian-angel of Earth Aphrodite D'angel Challu of Loroki. She and her twin sister are the result of a personality seperation spell performed them as one child. Overly critical King Gregory saw no use for his daughter but did not order her killed due to Lorokian law. The infant princess's maternal grandmother, sorceress Ariella Challu, was forced to perform the aforementioned spell on her, and the two girls were put on Earth where they were seperated and adopted by former Lorokian ambassadors while their brother, unknowing of his sisters, was raised to be king. Alex was raised in England by record executive Bryan Thomas and pop singer Marcia Thomas, who brought her up as a singer and an actress while sister Rei Rei was raised by world class ballerina Genevieve Viviane as a dancer. Unbeknownst to the king, Aphrodite Challu changed the royal birth records to include both and prepared for them to take the throne when the time was right, and then left to be angel-guardian of Earth. Jericho later became king and exiled his father upon royal decree. He left the kingdom under his wife's rule in order to become angel-guardian of Loroki. Queen Elizabeth ruled peacefully until the royal birth records of the twins, the only other blood siblings of the king, were unearthed and Gregory discovered a chance to regain his throne. Meanwhile, the twins reunite and are summoned by Queen Elizabeth and learn who they are. From then on, they try to keep the kingdom out of their power-hungry father's grasp while still staying true to themselves as performers.

Abilities: gymnastics, ninjutsu, speed just behind Sonic's, intelligence, leadership

Why: as a Princess of Loroki, Alex feels that it's her duty to protect her kingdom. She will not rest until her demented power-starved father is caught and put behind bars.

Love?: There is a certain animal magnetism between Alex and the male characters, but the obvious one being Sonic, who has a thing for redhead leader types. Whether or not she will return his affection will be revealed later

(one down several more to go) ((whew that took forever!))
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