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Tue Nov 15, 2011 4:17 am
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Name:Darian
Gender:Male
Age:26
Species:Demon(Pride)

Appearence:
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Darian is the very definition of tall, dark and handsome. He has black hair, and dark brown eyes, but a frighteningly kind smile.

Personality:Contrary to his dark looks, Darian is actually kind and warmer than most other demons. His sin is Pride though, and he can't stand being lesser than anyone else.

Romance:No
Other:His sword,Banan(called slayer) looks as such:
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Tue Nov 15, 2011 3:20 pm
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Name: Raymond Fleurs

Gender: Male

Age: 15

Species: Human

Appearance: Light green hair that he keeps long, but sometimes hates because it is so long. He has light green eyes that always seem to be working out some sort of problem. He is kind of short for his age. He is thin, and can run very fast due to his light weight.

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Personality: Raymond is extremely smart. He got accepted into the university around the time that his sisters did, and is still one of the brightest students in his classes. He is your typical teenage boy; doesn't like it when his sisters are around to potentially embarrass him, and likes girls. He REALLY likes girls... Because of his age and size, a lot of the girls at the university have to come and fondle over him, which he is very happy about.

Romance: No

Other: ?
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Tue Nov 15, 2011 7:25 pm
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Name: Raphael

Gender: Male

Age: Looks 22, real age unknown

Race: Demon (General of the Sin Sloth)

Appearance: He has vivid purple eyes that seem to always be searching for the easiest way to do things. When fighting, his eyes turn a chrome blue.His long, dark purple hair often hangs down in a haphazardness that often looks intentional...it's not. Rafael wears baggy clothes that hide his body, though girls still throw themselves at him because of his face.

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Romance?: Yes, but he is the last one with a romance (for my characters)

Personality: He has the disease called extreme-laziness because of his sin. Though he is hardworking as a general of Satan and has no memory of his life as an Angel. He is one the quietest out of all the demon generals and usually answers in the fewest of words possible.

History: Rafael has his name only because of the other Generals who decide his name. His memories from his time as an angel usually come in dreams and are as chaotic as can be. Normally he doesn't remember them when wakens from sleep. More often than not, Loki pulls him into his tricks and will select him from the group. The result of being dragged into Loki's tricks often has him being captured by talents. Out of all the demons, Rafael probably knows the most about talents and especially the talents in the University because of Loki. The only reason he hasn't been killed by the talents is because the talents feel sorry for him. Though they know he would most likely kill them.

Other: His blade is named Solemn and makes will make any fighter who is cut or injured by it stop fighting.

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Rafael is oblivious to Corline, who has huge crush on him, though he is always kind to her when he sees her... even when he finds himself chained to a wall or tied to a chair. To many other girls who have crushes on him he ignores or is mean to them.
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Tue Nov 15, 2011 11:04 pm
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Name:Micheal
Gender:male
Age:23
Species:Angel

Appearence:
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Micheal has red-brown hair and soft gold eyes. He seems younger than the other angels, but his power is undeniable.

Personality:Micheal is kind, but stern. He doesn't joke around like the others, and is normally all business.

History:Micheal has been and always will be the right hand of God. He himself through Satan from heavens gates and will do anything to stop him from returning.

Other:His swords name is Searath:
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Name:Ty
Gender:male
Age:23
Species:talent

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Ty has short platinum blonde hair and leafy green eyes. He is of medium height and build, but is handsome in his own way.

Personality:Ty is a joker in every way, and he always knows just where to pick at. He normally has a smile on his face, but hates demons because of what they did to his elder sister.

History:As long as he can remember, Ty has always been a talent. When he was a young boy, demons possessed
and killed his elder sister, leaving him alone to grow up on the streets. He's best friends with Alec.
Other:He uses a bow and arrow. The blue marking in the images glow green. They have no name, which is strange...
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Wed Nov 16, 2011 12:40 am
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Name: Lucas

Gender: Male

Age: 28

Species: Demon (greed)

Appearance: Dark blue hair and eyes, he always has a kind of smirk on his face. He usually wears a dress shirt and tie, on the verge of formal, but keeps it very casual as well.

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Personality: He is more serious than his twin, Loki, but encourages Loki's behavior. He's always seeking control and power.

Romance: No

Other: He has two twin daggers named Minoru (truth) and Uso (lie).

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Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:46 am
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Name: Jesephine (Finn) Fallbrooke

Gender: Female

Age: 22

Species: Human

Appearance: Finn has light blonde hair and blue eyes. She always has her hair up in a bun, and is always wearing some sort of skirt or dress. She is normal build, and quite tall.

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Personality: She is kind of a girly-girl, only in that she likes to wear dresses, bows and big sunhats all the time. In every other way, though, she is a tomboy. She likes sports and to get her hands dirty whenever she can. Finn hates her first name, and will get very angry at anyone who calls her by it. She climbs trees to hide in the leaves and think, listening to the wind blowing through the branches and the birds' chirping.

Romance: Yes

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Name: Sammael

Gender: Male

Age: Looks 26

Race: Angel

Appearance: Sammael has light brown hair and laughing brown eyes. He has scars on his face, but doesn't remember where they came from. He doesn't dress like a lot of the other angels, preferring to wear a t-shirt and jeans to their suits and ties.

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Personality: Sammael is usually pretty happy, a smile almost always glued to his face. He is freespirited and likes to have fun, but can be serious if the situation needs it. He is very much liked by some people, but absolutely lothed by others.

Romance?: No

Other: He uses throwing knives, named Itztli, similar to these:

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Wed Nov 16, 2011 3:53 am
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Name:Lucifer
Gender:Male
Age:27
Species:Lord of the demons and holder of all sins

Appearence:He has short, choppy hair that looks dark and light at the same time. His eyes are a deep, breath taking violet, and he is always wearing a long black trench coat.
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Personality:Cold and quite, he is cruel when he chooses to be. Not even his two closest generals know of his true feelings.
Other:Lucifer's blade can be in any form he wishes.
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Name: Valterra "Terra" Sparklight

Gender: Female

Age: 24

Race: Talent

Appearance: She has bright blue eyes with long with hair that is pulled back in ponytails held back by black butterfly clips and her headphones that are always on her head. She has an innocent pale white face, but when in battle the demon takes over. Her eyes become red, and a black hair band replaces the headphones. A crow will land on her shoulder or arm, and she'll be dressed in a black dress that would normally be white.

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Romance?: No

Personality: She is very up-beat and can always be found bopping her head or dancing around. She has a huge crush on Alec and lets him know it. She isn't very dependent on people and tends to forget those around her.

History: She doesn't remember her family or her life before the University in general. All she remembers is her mother's voice and her father's flute playing, which is probably why she always wears headphones.

Other: Her weapon is the crow on her arm named Jax and the clips she wears.

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Valterra's huge crush on Alec came to be because of his headphones and that he is like her. The only difference is that she is possessed by a demon and he and angel.
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Felicia made her way through the shadows, heart pounding in her ears. it was always like this when she was hunting demons. All fear and terror. Sh hated it, but it was a fact of life. She was a talent, and death was her blessing.
There was a flash of something from the corner of her eye, and a shout, and she felt her nails digging into her palmn.
"Bring them fear, Manon." Felica breathed, feeling the cool metal form against her skin. And then she was running, aiming for the Demons head. But before her blade reached his neck, he turned and cast a lazy glance her way.
Felicia dropped her sword.
"You again?" she said, sighing.
"Wrong place, wrong time." he replied dismissively. The other Talents stepped forward, confused.
"What happened?"Katie asked, running over.
"It's Raphael again," Felicia turned to him "You really aught to stop this, next time we might actually kill you and then where will you be?" He rolled his eyes.
" You gonna cuff me or not?"
"Yes." said Alec.
"No." Tara stated. The two glared at one another. Ash stepped between them.
"Now, now, this is definintly not the time to fight you two."
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Name: Corline Smith

Gender: Female

Age: 23

Race: Talent

Appearance: Long blond hair with a ribbon or other ornaments tied into her hair. She has dark blue eyes and is always running around. She could be called the "more outgoing one" but she doesn't notice everyone's reactions to her random comments. She often wears what she wears because of her heritage. She often wears it in blacks, browns or greens.

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Romance?: Yes

Personality: Upbeat, easily excited, and a little brainless. Just enough that she isn't very wary around Rafael. She is very in tune with what is going on around her.

History: All anyone knows is that she lived in the forest with her mother, though whether she still lives there and if her mother is alive is hidden in shadows.

Other: Her scepter is called Wald (forest) and allows her to control plants. The Fleurs family is often irritated with her because of what she has done to their garden in a spurt of fun.

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Fri Nov 18, 2011 5:58 pm
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Name: El (the "Good" one) and Lee (the "Evil" one)

Gender: Female

Age: 15, though she is much older in reality

Race: Demon

Appearance: El: She has dark green eyes with light purple triangles at the corners, pointing down. She has short, light purple hair with a small smile on her face. She wears a long white cloak with purple stripes on the side. A short black and white shirt with a short white and black skirt are often what she wears. She always wears striped stockings with black shoes, and her black choker. Her white hat with a thin purple ribbon is always with her, though sometimes she doesn't wear it. She also wears a band of cloth held in place by a light purple ribbon on her right arm.

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Lee: She has green blue eyes with longer and darker purple hair. Her right eye is covered by her hair and she is often found She wears purple leggings with black boots that has skulls and zippers on them. She was a black and white striped shirt and a spiked black choker. On her left hand she wears a laced purple glove and rarely smiles.

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Romance?: No, but El is a terrible flirt thanks to Loki.

Personality: El: El is very happy all the time and is often seen as harmless by the other demons. Whenever Loki or Lucas bring out the camera to terrorize Lee, she throws herself infront of it. She loves to have her picture taken and if that hides Lee at the same time, all the better. Though anyone who has messed with her finds out that she may be the "good" half, but she has a mean arm. She is also more relaxed when it comes to battle.

Lee: Lee is very down-trodden most of the time, and hides from cameras. Loki and Lucas will often try to take pictures of her. Lee is seen as the "evil" half of what the newbie demons call "Ellie", and she will get right up in their face and is often being held back from destroying the army that Loki and Lucas worked hard to perfect. She is very quiet and is often forgotten, but if someone messes with Loki or Lucas, or even her "good" half El, they find out she will try her best to harm them. Lee is very into battle and is often the shoving past Blake to get in on the fight.

History: Once, the two girls were one person, but thanks to Satan, "Ellie" became El and Lee. Satan split her into her "good" and "evil" halves and they haven't been one since. Though they are still the same person and are the lieutenant for Loki and Lucas. They often finish each other's sentences; which in turn drives some of the demons in the generals' army crazy. (EL: Sometimes it's good to have yourself in two places... Lee: Especially when your a demon...)

Other: It drives Lee crazy when El flirts or when someone flirts with her, and their favorite color is purple. (Don't touch their purple stuff!) When ever they go to the "human" world, they buy a something that is purple. ALL the generals found out what happens when they don't allow them to do that...
Lee is often found with Lucas, so she has become Lucas's lieutenant, and El has become Loki's. Though they are the same person, so they could trade places if they wished. Their weapons are purple whips named Froh (joy) and Traurig (sad). El carries Traurig with her under her cloak and Lee wears Froh around her waist.

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Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:22 am
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Katie watched Alec and Terra glare at each other for a few more seconds, then walked over to Raphael. “Let peace rain Dove.” Katie said quietly as she reached Raphael, always wary of this laid back demon.
Curious of how he’d gotten into this situation (again) she asked him, “What happened this time?”
He shrugged, “El and Loki, as usual. Why do you always ask?” He sounded bored, though his eyes were alert. Katie heard another sigh and glanced behind her. Jaquline stood behind her, offering her the chains that could bind Raphael.
“Why do we continue to put those on him?” Jaquline asked.
“Because,” Ash chimed in, “it’s that or having Satan pick someone new to take his place. Personally, I don’t want to have to learn how a new General ticks.” Playing with a new hair-tie as she spoke.
Nodding in agreement with them, Katie slapped the chains onto Raphael. Who rolled his eyes. He nodded for them to lead the way, to a new location that they had to change every time they caught him.
“Do us a favor,” Alec yelled over Terra, who was once more trying to re-gain his attention, “try to avoid getting caught.”
Terra started tapping her foot, in anger rather than to a tune only she could hear. Alec ignored her, his eyes going red. Katie didn’t glance back. This happened every time that they caught Raphael with both of them there. In a few more minutes or so, Terra was going to have red eyes and have gone through a wardrobe change. Katie glanced at Ash to see how she was handling this capture. She’d just joined the University, and was still settling into the group.
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Terra resisted the voice in her head that was telling her to change. It was a battle that she fought on a regular basis when she was close to Alec. Too bad she loved him... and he hated her. Shaking her head as she tapped her foot angrily, Terra looked at the newest member to the University. Ashlynn Grise. Terra didn't know much about her, but as she stood playing with a hair-tie, Terra had a feeling that where Ash was from they either A) killed demons on sight B) Tortured them and asked questions or C) Avoided them as much as possible. If it was option A, then them taking Raphael into custody was probably the strangest thing ever. Though every talent knew about the General of Sloth, the talents at the University dealt with him more frequently than others, he was still an irritant for many.
"Oh just cuff him already." Terra said, "He'll be rescued soon enough."
"I'll have you know that I can get out by myself." Indignation radiated off of Raphael.
"Really?" Sarcasm dripped from Terra's voice.
"Stop it Terra. I don't think you should antagonize him." Ash said spinning the hair tie faster and glancing around once more.
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