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Thu Jul 09, 2009 4:07 am
October Girl says...



**OK. Yeah we should do that**

**It's up to you how far though?**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 11:40 am
TNCowgirl says...



***She'll need to be a good witch, so say half a year? :P Shes a fast learner***
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:23 pm
October Girl says...



**OK**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 3:23 pm
October Girl says...



**OK**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 5:13 pm
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**You got anything to post?**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:24 pm
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**Oh, no... I thought you know since it was your idea you could post first**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:28 pm
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***Ok, give me a few minutes to type it up. I think it'll be a long one. Maybe he can come in while she is arguing with Holly. He can see her. :P She knows she's pregnate, but she won't tell anyone. ok?***
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:36 pm
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Dawn closed her eyes as she concentrated on the spell. Dante had left with Colton to get some supplies. She was surprised they had both left, but she was glad. She'd wanted to try this spell for a while. She muttered a few words and then felt her body go into a trance.

"Whats this about?" Holly demanded showing up in front of her.

"I found this spell, and I figured I should try it." She replied through her trance. She couldn't move and her eyes were glazed over, but she could talk.

"And what exactly does this spell mean?" Holly asked. "I've never heard of it."

"I can bring someone that died at least one century ago back." Dawn replied. "I figured sense you and Dante are still in love and that you got robbed of your love that I should do this." It hurt Dawn to say the words and to think about it. But she loved Dante, she wanted him to be happy. And if that meant she couldn't have him, she'd do it.

"Dawn, does Dante know about this?" Holly asked.

"No." She replied. "I wanted it to be a surprise."

"Well it won't be. I won't let you do this. Don't you understand, my time was several centuries ago. Our love was meant for back then, and now your supposed to love him, not me." Holly replied.

"You don't mean it. Love doesn't end because of the years." Dawn replied. "This will make Dante happy."

"He is happy, Dawn."

"He can't be. He still says your name at night, he still loves you." Dawn replied. If she wasn't in the trance she'd be crying.

"Those are Ezra's doings, to get at you. Do you not understand, Dante loves you."

"Not like he did you, and he never will. I want to give him this, why can't you just understand."

"I do, but I won't let it happen, Dawn. My time is up." Holly replied. "I will not come back."

"But if Dante finds out I could do this, and that I didn't......"

"He won't care, Dawn. He's finally moving on." Holly replied.

"No, no he isn't. You don't hear him, see him." Dawn took a deep breath. "Please, do this for Dante."

"No!" Holly growled. Dawn shivered as she felt Dante walk into the room. Holly wouldn't leave when she tried to kill the connection.


***i'll let you take it form here. :P Just have him react to seeing Holly. :P And have them talk or whatever. :P***
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:47 pm
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Dante had been doing his own laundry when he heard shouts from above. He raced up stairs to Dawn he placed his hand on the metal handle. he heard a familuar voice, it sounded like... No... It couldn't be... Holly? A tremble traveled down his spine. Oh God, Holly.

"Daylight what the hell are you-" Dante froze. Sweat trickled down his neck as his muscles bunched. "Holly? Dawn? What is going on?" he asked, he was scared. Two women he loved in the room, could this get any more awkward?
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:53 pm
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Dawn couldn't move her head, but she could see Dante. Why didn't Holly leave, she always did when he came up.

"Hello, Dante." Holly said. Dawn watched Dante slowly sit down.

"Holly." She could hear the emotion in his voice and it made her throat tighten up. "What is going on?"

"Well, Dawn got the fool idea to bring me back to life. I won't." Holly replied crossing her arms.

"It only makes sense." Dawn replied.

"No it doesn't. My time was a long time ago." Holly replied firmly. "To have both me and you in the world at the same time woudl be disastorous."

"How?" Dawn demanded.

"Doesn't matter, I will not come back." Holly turned and looked at Dante. "It's about time you fully move on."



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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:03 pm
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Dante just stared. Holly didn't want to come back. But he wanted Dawn.

"Your right." Dante swallowed thickly looking at Holly.

"What?!" Dawn growled.

Dante turned to look at her, his eyes going yellow and green. "She's right... And I have moved on. There's always going to be a part of me that will love Holly and no one could ever replace it. But there's always going to be a part of me who has a part only you can fill, Dawn." Dante said. "I'll always love both of you. But Holly... Your dead." he whispered, when pain threatened to close in.
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:08 pm
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"Thank you!" Holly stood up and crossed her arms. "Now convince her of that. I'm going back home, when you're no longer acting like your pregnate, Dawn, you can call on me again. But I don't like this side of you. And seriously, do yourself a favor and stop living in the past you didn't live, Dante's the only one that can do that and I'm glad he isn't."

"Uh....." Dawn bit her lip, well would've if she could've.

"Right you gotta bring someone back. Foolish girl, letting your emotions drive you." Holly shook her head. "Teach her better, Dante. Seriously. And figure out someone to come back to life, I want to go home."
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:19 pm
October Girl says...



**I don't get that post. Does Dante know she's pregnant?**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:24 pm
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**Nope, but Holly is guessing. :P Hehehehehehe. :D **
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:32 pm
October Girl says...



**So they don't actualy know for sure?**
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