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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:44 pm
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**No, but Dawn is pretty sure. If I disappear its cause we have a storm and it'll fry my internet. :S But I'll post as long as I can. :D**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:46 pm
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OH >_< Ok no problem. One more question did he hear Holly guess that Dawn was pregnant???*
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:48 pm
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**Ya. :D**
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 8:50 pm
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**Ya. :D**
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 2:45 am
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This information took about two mintues to register in Dante's mind. He nearly choked. Pregnant? Maybe? Dawn?

"That's impossible. I can't sire children." he shook his head. "Dawn... Dawn can't be... pre-preg... Pregnant." he shook.

Holly blushed. "That's what you said before." she left then.

Dawn looked up at him.

"Let's go." Dante said.

She looked up with alarm. "What? Go where?"

He rolled his eyes. "We're going to the supermarket. I suggest you bring a bottle of water." he said, she was going to take an early pregnancy test.
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 2:48 am
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"Uh, no!" She replied crossing her arms. "Not til you tell me why." He rolled his eyes again.

"Dawn, we're going to see if Holly is right." He replied.

"No! I'm not pregnant." She hissed. She had a feeling she was though.

"Don't make me carry you there." He replied walking over.

"Don't try it, bud. There is no way I'm going to take a test like that." She jumped up and walked towards the door. HE caught her around the waist and tossed her over his shoulder walking down the stairs. "PUT. ME. DOWN. NOW!" She screamed at him. Colt saw her and started laughing. "This isn't a joke, put me down now. You can't make me do this! You won't!!"
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:03 pm
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Dante tried to be careful with her incase she was pregnant. He growled when she kept pounding on his back. He walked into the market with a woman slung over her shoulder. He grabbed the first early pregnancy test in the bunch and opened the bathroom. He threw the test into the room and put her on the counter.

"Six minutes." he growled and slammed the door behind.
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:16 pm
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Dawn frowned at the door and pulled her knees up to her chest leaning against the wall. If he though she was going to take that stupid test he was mistaken. A few minutes later the door opened. The box was still where he'd thrown it.

"Dawn!" He growled.

"I'm not going to be told what to do." She replied crossing her arms. "Plus, I don't need to pee."

"Here." He handed her some water. "Drink it."

"Why? Why are you so anxious?" She demanded jumping off the counter and grabbing the drink crossing her arms. "
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 8:44 pm
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Dawn growled. "I'm not pregnant!"

Dante crossed his arms, and stared down at her. "Do you know that for a fact? Have you had your period since that one night?" he grinned.

"I'm not about to discuss my period with you!" she growled. "I'm not pregnant!"

"Take the test Dawn." he said. "Please." then he left.
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Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:37 pm
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Dawn bit her lower lip as he left. SHe hadn't had her stupid period. She took the test and waited pacing back and forth. She looked at the test and dropped it. It had read positive. She quickly threw it away and opened the door running into Dante.

"Well?" He demanded.

"I'm going home. I'm not playing your games." She said fighting to keep her voice normal before she turned and ran out the front door.


**Maybe have him find the test thingy. :P **
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Sat Jul 11, 2009 2:54 am
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Dante walked into the bathroom where Dawn had just occupied. He looked around and realized she might have thrown it away. He checked in trash can where the paper towels were thrown at. He saw the test finally. A small pink plus sign mocked him where it layed. When Dante rushed outside she was already gone. He blinked as he looked he stood on her porch. He stormed in the door and saw her shaking.

"Why and the hell didn't you tell me?!" he growled.
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Sun Jul 12, 2009 2:46 pm
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Dawn looked at him wrapping her arms closer to her. "GO AWAY!" She hissed.

"NO! Answer my question." He growled at her.

"Cause! I figured you get mad like you are right now!" She replied. "And I don't need to be yelled at right now." She turned her back on him curling up. She was pregnant. She swallowed hard, what was going to happen? Was it going to be ok? Or would she end up like Holly?
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:41 am
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Dante had no idea what to do. He should have been more careful. How could he have been so blind. He loved her but they just weren't married yet. He took a deep breath and tried to calm himself down, although that felt so impossible.

"It's fine. Look Dawn, it's just an exepected surprise." he said simply. "I'm excited!" he smiled. "And so should you be." He walked up to her and picked her up, careful with her stomach. Just then Colt walked into the room with Ice Cream in a bowl.

"Colt guess what?!" Dawn smiled.

"Yeah, Congratulations." he nodded and walked away.

Dawn frowned. "You heard?" she asked.

Colt laughed. "Yeah, right. A blind man could see that was coming. Future Seeker, sweetheart." Colt winked and walked into his room.

Dante huffed. "He really needs a girlfriend."
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:26 pm
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Dawn tucked her head against Dante's head. She took a deep breath and bit her lip.

"Whats wrong?" Dante asked.

"Nothing." She replied wtih a shrug.

"Don't lie, Daylight." He replied as he set her on the couch.

"I'm just fine." She replied firmly as she curled up a little.

"Daylight!" He replied just as firmly.

"I'm scared, ok?" She growled turning so he couldn't see her face that was burried in a pillow on the couch.
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Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:39 pm
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He looked at her curiously, why was she afraid? Did she not want the baby? Dante didn't move in too much closer if she needed her space he'd give it to her. He was affraid himself. He didn't know what was wrong? Had it been hormones?

"Why are you scared." he forced himself to ask the next question. "Do you not want the baby?" he asked.
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