Alright, I already posted what the story was about in the 'tell about your story' post. Check it out.
Changes: Violet is now Danny's name. Her best friend (wrote by Forever) also has a power and they're both needed for things to play out. (:
Violet stood beneath the oak tree. Rain pelted her. Little rivulets ran down her cheeks and neck. It could easily be mistaken as the rain, but it was really tears. Tears that she shed quite often. Violet knew she shouldn't cry, but she couldn't help herself. She wished her brother was here, but then that's why she was crying. She had killed her brother. She lifted her face to the rain, almost as if her tears were an offering to the darkness around her.
It was one o'clock in the morning and she knew she should be in bed, but she couldn't sleep. She never could when she heard the rain pelt her window. It had been a rainy night when her brother died. Of course it was only rainy because she willed it to rain. Chandler had known she could control the weather and made her practice. He said it was a part of her. One that needed to be perfected. Little did he know that, that little bit of advice had gotten himself killed.
"Chandler," she whispered to the clouds. She sank to her knees getting mud on her pajama bottoms. Violet didn't care. Sometimes the pain became unbearable. Just like now. She held her head in her hands and stopped the rain. She hated to use her power, she rarely used it since Chandler's death, but the weather always had changed her moods. Right now, she needed a clear night. One where she could forget her pain and go to sleep.
Violet rose from the ground and walked inside. Her aunt was still asleep, completely unaware of the excruciating pain her niece had just felt. It didn't matter. She didn't want her to know. Inside her room, behind the closed doors, she felt secure. There was no weather to mess with her feelings and there was a soft bed and pillow awaiting her. Violet pushed herself under the sheets without bothering to change her muddy clothes.
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