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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:02 am
.:Echelon:. says...



"You want me" He asked surpised, "and all this time I thought you where just useing me to get back at Tom"

"Of course I want you, you monkey" She smiled and pushed Jake up against the wall kissing him. Making sure nobody could see.

"I love you Leal" He smiled,

"ahhh shut up and enjy the little time we have together in school" She grinned kissing Jake again.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:09 am
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Jake laughed and held her close as they kissed. She felt his hands slip down to her butt and she smiled kissing him more.

"I like you so much better." She said smiling at him when they pulled apart.

"LIke, that's all?" He smiled.

"Give me time." She laughed kissing him agai.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:25 am
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*look at my title :P*

"Ok sweet heart, i have all the time in the world" He said holding her closer enjoying her kiss.

Tom's brother Kris looked round the corner.

"Oh shit" he laughed as he saw them together and than run off. They pulled apart.

"Great" Jake said.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:28 am
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"Get him!" She said taking off after him. She found him and grabbed him turning him around.

"Tom's gonna kill you Jake." Kris laughed.

"Really?" She asked. "Cause last I checked Tom was cheatin on me, first." She rpelied.

"eh always cheats." Kris replied.

"Then it's about time someone did it back. Please don't tell?" She asked.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:34 am
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"Well as i like you Leal" Kris said, "well... if you take me on a date then i might not tell"

"You wait?" Jake shouts,

"You heard me" Kris said, "didn't you Leal"
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:44 am
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Leal sighed. "And what am I supposed to do?" She asked.

"Take me out to eat." He replid with a smile.

"No, cause I doubt it'd stay quiet." She hissed.

"We'll make it quiet." He smiled.

"Fine!" She hissed.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:57 am
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"Call it a date then" Kriss grinned

"Well its better than your plans getting wrecked isn't it" Jake said as he held Leal in his arms.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:00 am
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"Ya, just one date." She repleid.

"Ya, just one." He repled.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:07 am
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"Trust me Kris is a cool guy" Said Jake, "Hopefully he wont try it on with you"

"You what?" Said Leal,

"Well Kris has been known to take others girlfriends" Replied Jake,

"Who said im your girlfriend" Grinned Leal as she ran off, blowing a kiss to Jake.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:11 am
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Leal turned a corner and ran into Tom, Kayliegh was walkin next to him. She wrapped her arms around his neck and kissed him.

"We better get to class." She smiled.
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Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:19 am
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*I will post tomorrow as of now i am half aslepp*
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Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:11 am
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**Don't forget to post**
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 7:13 pm
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"What we got girl" He smiled at her as she wrapped her arms around his sholders.

"biology" she smiled back, kissing him as he said this.

Kayleigh walked beside them talking to Jake about how she met up with a few friends at dinner. When they got to the classroom Mr Howard sat them all together.
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:21 pm
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After school Leal watched Tom leave and then Kris walked over. "Ready for that date?" He smiled.

"Ya ya." She growled at him smiling at Jake over his shoulder. "You try to kiss me and you won't ever be reproducing."
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:37 pm
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"kk chicky" He smiled as he jumped into his shiny red volvo.
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It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
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