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After The Sunset



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Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:10 am
.:Echelon:. says...



"Im sorry that you cant trust me no more" Emily said as she held his hand,"Now where?"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:19 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad frowned. "If you tell the truth I can." I took her to a table and sat her down. "Now...it's time for the truth. Please...tell me everything."





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Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:29 am
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Emily couldnt get the words out but then she started, "my parents love me, there is no perfect sister called Stacey,thats me, They never disowned me, My boyfriend didnt cheat on me, i cheated on him with you, college is wicked, my best friend isnt sucicidal, and my arms are so people will feel sorry for me"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Dec 01, 2008 2:48 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad was shocked. "Why do you lie to me?!" He asked, almost yelled.

she shrunk back at his harsh tone, tears running down her face.

"Explain to me, Emily. why did you lie to me?! Why did you cheat on him?! What will guarentee you won't cheat on me?"





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Tue Dec 02, 2008 10:36 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



"I lied to you cause I wanted you!!"She shouted back at him,

he ran outside hopeing Cariad would go after her.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:03 pm
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Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad didn't know what to do. Should he go after her? He ran a hand through his hair. He finally went out of the building and looked around for Emily. He saw her on the sidewalk, crying. He sat down beside her. "There are other ways to get my attention than lying to me and cheating on your bf. How can I be guarenteed that you won't cheat on me if you find someone better?"
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Fri Dec 05, 2008 2:19 pm
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"I wont find someone better" She cried as she squeezed him in her arms.

"Leo had already cheated on me before, I wanted to get back at him but your more than that, I love you"

She held her hand to his face and kissed him.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sat Dec 06, 2008 5:26 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad didn't know what to think. Was she still lying to him?! But he loved her. He held her close and pushed into the kiss, stroking her hair as he did. He pulled away and looked deeply into her eyes. "I love you, but you're going to HAVE to tell me the truth from now on, no matter what, okay?!"
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:47 pm
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"no matter what" she promised as she held his hand,

Pictures of her and Leo pushed into her mind, she had to push them out.

"Promise me this Emily" cariad said as he let go of her hand then held it tighter.

"I promise you, I swear on my life" Emily said not knowing what commitment she had just committed.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:40 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad nodded. "Good." He kissed her passionately. "What would you like to do now, gorgeous?"

She shrugged. He laughed and kissed her neck passionately. "You smell good..." He commented.
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:44 am
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"Bite me then" she said, "Thats what I want you too do, bite me"

"I cant emily, I dont want to hurt you" said Cariad

"Just do it" Emily shouted "I want to be with you forever"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:01 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad pulled away. "No, Em! I can't!"

Tears filled her eyes. "Don't you love me?!"

"Of course I do!!! I don't want to hurt you! I just love you."
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:08 am
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"But if you bite me, I wont turn old and I can be with you forever" she cried,

"I cant Em!" he stressed,

"Please, Please" she cries as she buries her head into her chest.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Dec 24, 2008 4:01 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad ran a hand through his hair. "Okay. Is there anything you want to do before I turn you?" He asked, stroking her hair softly. He loved her so much. He didn't want to ever be without her.
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Fri Dec 26, 2008 9:06 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



"Nothing, I have everything I want waiting for me when I awake" She grinned.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!








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