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After The Sunset



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Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:27 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad laughed. "Is there anything you want to do, you litte minx?"

She crinkled her nose in an adorable little way. "Me? A minx?"

"Yup. Now, is there anything you'd like to do?"





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 1:55 pm
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"i donno, something"emily smiled.

"umm...." Cariad thought
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 2:23 pm
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Cariad sighed. "There's nothing you enjoy doing?"He asked. He just wanted to make her happy...be the best he could be for her. He really liked her and he didn't want to lose her. It would break his heart if he did lose her...





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:25 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



*omg im obessed with metro station, only just heard them...random*

"should we go for something to eat, its still dark" asks Emily as she shrokes his shoulder length hair. She grabbed the back of his clothes as she held him tight to her, waiting for her answer.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 4:31 pm
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He smiled. "We can...But I don't eat human food...nd I'm not hungry. But, we can go get whatever you'd like." He stroked her cheek, letting her play with his hair. He loved this girl so much...it was weird.





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:50 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



She wondered how a cold blooded immortal could ever love her. His handsome looks stood out like a light in a pitch black sky. They ran down stairs and out of the door and then started to walk towards kfc.

As they entered the shop Emily pulled a few coppers out of her pocket. Cariad told her to put them away and that he would pay.

They sat at the table.

"Thanks Cariad...."said emily

"your welcome"

"can i tell you something Cariad"

"if course Emily"

Emily clutched her hand tighter in his palm.

"I love you"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 6:59 pm
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Cariad could've sworn he felt his dead heart start pounding. She loved him! He loved her.

"I love you too, Mily." He whispered. He kissed hr passionately. He didn't care who was watching, he just did it. She was so amazing...he couldn't believe she loved him.

"Now, eat. You need your strength." He said lovingly. He knew he was beaming.





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:05 pm
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I could she the smile on his face, he must love me too. The bad thing was he was a vampire.... A blood sucker......a murderer. Then flashbacks of leo can back. "No Emily you cant still like him"i thought to myself. I turned around. leo looked straight at me.Then he looked at my arms, he knew it was his fault, that i had been teling Cariad a lie. My family loved me, I had loads of friends and I was never lonely. I told Leo we would have a break but him seeing me with cariad must of broke his heart. A tear rolled down my face.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:25 pm
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Cariad looked at her worridly. "Mily, you okay?" He whiped the tear from her face and kissed both her cheeks. "What's wrong, Emily?!"

He wanted to pull her to him...to hold and comfort her...but she seemed to shrink away. "Did I do something wrong?" He asked.

She shook her head, more tears coming.

"Then what's wrong, love?"





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:36 pm
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"its nothing"She cried, she could see leo out the corner of her eye. His face was red and a tear was rolling down his face.

"is it him"Cariad says "is that Leo"

She cried a bit more,

"Emily?"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 7:39 pm
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Cariad growled. "Did he hurt you?! How could he dump you?!" He took a deep breath. "Come on. we can leave...Are you okay?" He was concerned. she wouldn't talk to him. "Emily...would you at least try and explain?"





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:29 pm
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"He didnt dump me.... we were ment have a break and go back out now"Emily said to Cariad, "I'm sorry I didnt tell you the truth"

She tried to hug him but he backed away.

"cariad?"

"Hmm...Emily" Leo intrurupted.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Nov 30, 2008 8:32 pm
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Cariad felt betrayed and hurt. how could she do this? Was she just playing with him? or did she really care.

He looked at Leo. "Hey. I was just leaving. sorry to get in your way." How could a human do this to HIM?! He wanted to rip the other guy to pieces and drink every ounce of his blood.





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Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:46 am
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"cariad! i love you not him" she shouted as a tear rolled down leo's face.

leo walked off "bye then".

Now emily was alone, and she was afaid of being alone.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:57 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad stopped and turned to her. He took her deep in her arms and kissed her softly. "I love you too. But You have to to tell me the truth at all times, okay?!"

she nodded and I just held her tightly.








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