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After The Sunset



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Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:28 am
.:Echelon:. says...



"err..of course, i'd trust you with my life, but how are we ment be together with your dad about"she cried,

Then she suddenly had the urge to push him on the bed and smack him with a cushion.

She sticks her tougue out at him.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:49 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad laughed. He hit her with a pillow. He smiled and kissed her. He held her tight. "Would it freak you out if I say I love you?"





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:53 am
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"no!, what bout if i said it"she laughed,

"I LOVE YOU!!!" she shouted, and whacked him his a harder cushion.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:00 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



He laughed. "Not having fun, are you?" He smiled and whacked hr with his pillow. It was fun. He kept hitting her. he rolled and got tangledwith her. He ticked her stomach.





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:04 am
.:Echelon:. says...



"no..no..stop it" she shouted playfully,"of course im enjoying my self".
She slapped another pillow round his head,and a piece of paper fell out.
It said'Capture the human girl'.

"Whats this?"Emily said as she grabbed the letter.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:09 pm
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Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad chuckled. "What? what is it?"

She looked upset. "This! It's a plan to get a human girl!" she cried.

His eyes widened. "What?! I don't even know what that is!"

"Don't lie to me!" she sobbed. "You just want to have my blood!"

He growled. "If that were true, you'd already be dead. I'm stronger and faster than you. If I really wanted you for a snack then you'd be dead." He touched her face gently. "Please. Do you really think that couuld harm you?"





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:23 pm
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"hmm... i dont no what to think anymore" She said in a disapointed voice, She didnt no what to think, sould she believe him?

"Em.."he started

"no! i didnt want to hear it!"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:29 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad growled. "Look, can kill you if you want me toow It wouldn't take any effort!" He was getting mad...that was not a good thing.

He took a deep breath. "Look, Emily, I really like you. I don't know how to make you believe that..."





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:40 pm
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" by changeing, and moving away from this monster you call your dad" Said replyed,

"How dare you say that about my father!"he growls

"He is! He turned you into this monster!" she screamed in his face.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 6:39 pm
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Cariad growled. "Monster?! Like you have any room to be talking! What about you?! You have scars all over you, your parents hate you, you were all alone until me! I'll take you back to that life if you'd like! I didn't have to stop! I could've let you cry!" He hissed.





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Fri Nov 28, 2008 9:59 pm
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" why did you then, why was I so special!!" Emily shouted

" well go then, go back to your Horrible family"He shouted back at her,

"maybe I will" she cried.

She went to walk out the room but Cariad grabbed her arm.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:08 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad sighed. "Please donzt. I really like you. You're...perfect. I can't change wht I am. I can't just stop being a vampire. But...I do like you...a lot. Please donzt go. But...if you want to...then..okay. fine. go. I won't stop you." He sighed and let go of her wrist. "Just...go ahead and leave. I know I'm a monster."





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Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:56 pm
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She grabbed her wrist, it hurt.

" i don't want to go" she said.

he came up to her, pressed his soft lips against mine.

"thank you Emily"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:07 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad gently ran his hands through her hair. He kissed her head. "Sorry if I hurt you. I didn't mean to, my angel."

she sighed and he grinned. "I love you, Emily."





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Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:15 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



" I love you too, cariad.." she said as she smothed her hands down his back. He held him very close to her and whispered sweet nothings into his ear.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!








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