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Sallie (New Comer)
Sallie (New Comer)
I grumbled twice. My neck ached and twitched. It was my position. Slowly sitting up and rubbing my neck, I mumbled to myself an “Ouch”. I had slept on the couch again, my head on the couch’s arm, my body lay flat on the couch, and my neck almost in a forty-five-degree angle. The thoughts of getting upstairs and laying my body on my bed seemed like heaven.
I rubbed my eyes and narrowed them on the green wall-clock above the door, which was across the room. I tried to read the time. It was dark, but I managed to get a figure: it was somewhere around three ten in the morning. I leaned forward, stretching my back a bit. I held out my arms, as far as I could, and then shuffled the papers cluttered on the center table, smoothing the crumpled edges before inserting them between the pages of my dictionary. They were drafts—my poem drafts. I love poetry and would stay up late just looking for the perfect word for the perfect imagery. And that sometimes meant falling asleep on the couch.
I stood up and folded the blanket on the floor. Mom had probably wrapped me in it before switching off the light, and I had obviously moved while asleep as it fell on the floor. Mother was very caring, and I smiled as I thought about it. She'd always been there when I needed her: when I graduated Junior High, she pinched my nose and said, with tears in her eyes, "My baby's grown"; when I was a freshman and my first boyfriend, Ace, broke up with me harshly, she wiped my tears to say confidently, "He wasn't even worth it"; and I could go on and on. She always had a way of seeing the "brighter side" of things; maybe I got my optimism from her. And when Daddy died, it was my turn to be her comforter. It was my turn to say, "It's okay"; but somehow, it felt wrong. We both missed Daddy, and it was never okay. Still we managed to live on, I guessed, it was just the two of us now. And I knew she wouldn't be able to stand it if we were separated.
Yawning, I walked across the room and stumbled upon a pen. After picking it up, I crawled over the wall, stood up, and felt for the light switch. Once the light was on, I went for the bathroom. But before I could enter, I heard a loud knock at the door. I supposed my bladder could still hold 'it' so I hastily went for the door, the knocking getting louder and louder as if the late, I mean early visitor wasn't very patient. Maybe he or she actually wasn't really patient.
I peeked through the blinds' slats and saw a man in a totally white tuxedo. I thought it was a bit strange.
“Sallie Vermont?” he asked. He'd spotted the small space I'd made and his dull and deep black eyes looked straight at me. His voice was loud and clear, and he probably didn’t even mind that it was still early in the morning and people were asleep.
“May I please know who you are?” I asked back in the most polite way as I could.
“Open the door at once,” he demanded.
“May I please know first who you are?” I wasn’t going to open the door to a total stranger, especially at this time.
The knob clacked furiously. I let go of the slats and watched the knob move by itself. He was destroying it!
Panicking, I froze for a minute. Then I thought about Mom. She was asleep, not knowing that there was a mad man in a frosty suit, trying to break in. My heart raced and its pounding felt as if my heart was strong enough to rip through my chest.
Then the most unexpected thing happened: the knob stopped moving.
After a few moments, I crept by the wall and looked through the blinds again. I couldn't see him. Was he gone? Was my mind only playing tricks on me? I sighed. Good.
I switched off the light, walked up the center table, and grabbed my dictionary. A swift cold wind gusted through the back window and the curtains waved. I stared at it till the curtains stopped moving. A shadow passed by swiftly. Something wasn't right. Something was lurking around for me. Someone's watching me.
I shook my head and weakly slapped my face. All I need is some more sleep. There isn't something or anybody there. I hoped...
Suddenly, I heard the door flung open. I faced it and saw the ghostly man. I didn't know how he opened the door, I didn't even want to know. I just strove to turn around, tried to lift up my feet and run. But the next thing I knew, the Man-in-White was seizing my arm.
“Ow! Please let go!”
“You’re coming with me," he said. His tone was maintained on an A sharp two octaves below C major.
"Where are we going?"
"Do as I say and no one will get hurt."
“I will! But please leave my Mother alone!”
“Grab your things. You have exactly ten minutes to pack.” He let my arm go and it made a red mark. The grip was tight.
Not wanting any trouble, I followed and ran upstairs, grabbing as much things as I could: t-shirts, notebooks, pens, dictionary and grammar books. Then I ran to the bathroom, fumbling through things, thinking twice if something was worth to bring. “Toothbrush?” I whispered to myself, panting. I stared at my pink toothbrush, its bristles twisted. My hand was shaking. “Of course.” I finally decided so I threw it in my bag.
When I'd thought I had everything I needed to wherever I was being dragged to, no matter how long and how far, I ran downstairs with my about-to-explode backpack.
“When will we get back, Sir? So I can wake up my mother and tell her,” I told the man. With all the loud conversations, I'd bet my life that Mom was still asleep. She was seriously a heavy sleeper.
“I cannot tell you for the moment. Now wear this.” He handed me a black cloth. It took me a moment to learn I was supposed to be blindfolded.
“I’m just saying goodbye to my mother, please, sir,” I pleaded, stepping back just in case if he said yes, I could run back upstairs at once.
“No time,” he replied. And I knew I wouldn’t get my request.
I wore my bag, took the cloth and wrapped it around my eyes. Thoughts swam through my head.
I felt his strong grip around my arm again, and we started walking—walking out of the house—walking out of my home. I tried convincing myself that everything would be fine. It had always worked, but no matter how optimistic I'd tried to be, I couldn’t think of anything good out of this. What if I never see this village again? What if I never see Mom again? What would Mom think when she woke up the next morning finding the couch empty? She was already a lonely woman when she'd lost Daddy. And now it seemed like she'd lost her only child, too.
I felt the man carry me inside a vehicle. I could tell because my weight sunk when I got in and there was a soft sound of engine. If it was dark to be blindfolded in the streets, it was even darker here.
Impetuously, I asked, “Can I first go to the bathroom? I don’t think my bladder can hold it any longer.”
I heard something slide, then clicked as if locked. “No,” the man said. His voice like the engine that roared as the vehicle zoomed through the streets.
I only sat silently, knowing well that nothing I requested would be granted. At least, I thought, I’m alive.
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