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Wed Mar 05, 2014 7:20 pm
Clarity says...



Nah, I prefer the one I changed. Thanks anyways though! :)
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:43 pm
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First I like to thank everyone who joined this storybook, I have approved all profiles that have been submitted. @SubtleSanity, I will be accepting late profiles until Match 10th so please have your profile in before then. @TimmyJake I will approve your profile once you resubmit it.

Everyone else, we will be starting tomorrow. Plot ideas, extra character that you may have in mind will be posted here. Any questions maybe asked and so on and so forth.
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:03 pm
TinyJarStoredDreams says...



Okay since there are factions based off of certain things, I would guess our characters faction might be like women. Like a no boys allowed kinda deal, sound good?
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:09 pm
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@TimyJarStoredDreams We're not all in a faction. Well, Lys isn't anyways.
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:12 pm
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@Clarity is correct, factions are around but I don't plan on everyone being in a faction. I mean you could have that if you want to for your character, but if you have your character in a faction, you'll have to get creative with it.
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:30 pm
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Ohh okay, thanks for clarifying that :)
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 12:45 am
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Is there any certain way all the characters are going to meet each other?
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 12:50 am
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I was going to figure that out, I'm not certain yet. But I'm sure to come up with something, it would be nice to have a few more people in this. Anyone got a good suggestion to bring in?
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 1:44 am
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A) A religious Faction, believing they have to sacrifice certain people within a few days to save themselves or please their God, could abduct them and hold them captive. Somehow they'll escape, of course, and run into Dante's character, since it seems unlikely that she'll get captured by anything anytime soon.

B) They could get captured by Alice's Faction, for either infringing on territory or whatever happens, escape with her, and run into Genesis.

C)Through a series of coincidences they could all end up together. For example, Tiny's character could somehow get separated from her group during a territorial thing or something, and end up having to wander, looking to return to her long-gone group. Jack and Lyssa are already on their own, I think, so they can both be looking for food or supplies and run into each other and end up having to group up (One of them could get injured and the other could feel obligated to take care of them, for example). During a raid, Alice could get held captive or escape during the confusion. And we all somehow run into Genesis again. (your character is obviously too awesome, @Avalon. ;) )

These are just some rough ideas.
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 2:04 am
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I like C, I have been thinking up some plot things about Elizabeth running from factions so that fits perfect for me
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 2:16 am
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Sorry about the profile, my family is been hectic is week. I was thinking maybe all the factions could have an annual meeting in some sort of place? Is mandatory as to signify peace amongst the nations but in fact. Most people just want to find our the other faction's weaknesses. Is just an idea...I will try get that profile in today or tomorrow.
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 2:23 am
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SubtleSanity wrote:Sorry about the profile, my family is been hectic is week. I was thinking maybe all the factions could have an annual meeting in some sort of place? Is mandatory as to signify peace amongst the nations but in fact. Most people just want to find our the other faction's weaknesses. Is just an idea...I will try get that profile in today or tomorrow.


Some factions are more war-like than others. Some more religious than others, so it wouldn't be to far fetched to say there isn't tension between the factions. Alice's faction could be the one with the main hold on the city.

What I would like to see is someone to make a faction leader, it would be hard, but if done it could be a very good character.
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 4:02 pm
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C sounds good to me. I'm not bothered who Lys bumps in to, so whoever wants to be that person, feel free to volunteer. XD
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Fri Mar 07, 2014 5:47 pm
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Your all free to post as you wish, as before, plot ideas are welcome and please announce any relations between characters that you have discussed with said author.
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Sat Mar 08, 2014 5:03 pm
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Double post blah.

@TakeThatYouFiend please have your profile submitted before March 10th, thank you.
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