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Captured, Escape, and Rescue



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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:00 pm
EllaBliss says...



If the last spot is still open , I'll take it.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:03 pm
kat13254 says...



Slide could be friends with Michelle!
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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:06 pm
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Shadowlight says...



I also have a Big burly polar bear who wouldn't mind a friend :3

Maybe one of the hunters is his partner/best friend and he's going on his own to rescue him/her?

thoughts?
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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:13 pm
Ventomology says...



Ooh! I think Slide and Michelle would get along very well. Should we write about them meeting up, or will they just be friends from the get go?
"I've got dreams like you--no really!--just much less, touchy-feeley.
They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:15 pm
kat13254 says...



Either would be fine by me, but if they meet up then there could be some interesting scenes of them bonding to become good friends. Also something somewhat related to this, my dog looked at me funny when I said I was gonna be friends with a snake! :mrgreen:
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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:27 pm
Ventomology says...



Wouldn't it be fun if they met while hunting the same rabbit?
"I've got dreams like you--no really!--just much less, touchy-feeley.
They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:29 pm
kat13254 says...



That works. First we should wait for the story to begin to work out the small details
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Sun Jan 26, 2014 6:36 pm
Messenger says...



hey glad to see you all talking about it! I was thinking the humans and animals would make friends so you were correct think on those lines!
  





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Mon Jan 27, 2014 2:10 am
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@EllaBliss and @TimmyJake, can you both please subscribe to the storybook, and all of you have not yet made your character, please do! I want to start this soon.
  





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Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:51 pm
kat13254 says...



Just an idea, all of the hunters could become friends with one animal and once they get really closely bonded (Just some weird idea I had during math XD) they can sort of sense what the hunter is feeling (and vice versa) . An example is like the hunter gets hurt the animal feels it (Ex. Michelle gets hurt then slide feels it)
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Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:55 pm
EllaBliss says...



Kat (Almost typed your real name), how can you even think during math? I was there beside you and you hardly said a word, other than to remind me of (cencorcensorcensor) and talk about Anime. It hardly looked like you were thinking at all!
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:57 pm
kat13254 says...



I can think and talk at the same time! XD
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Mon Jan 27, 2014 11:50 pm
Ventomology says...



So when can we begin posting?
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They mainly happen somewhere warm and sunny
on an island that I own, tanned and rested and alone
surrounded by enormous piles of money." -Flynn Rider, Tangled
  





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Tue Jan 28, 2014 2:31 am
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I'll post once every one has made their profile!
  





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Tue Jan 28, 2014 5:24 am
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@EllasBLiss, we await you!

I like all these ideas you are coming up with. But, the hunters are going to be captured rather quickly. Most likely the animals will make friends with the Healer, Warrior, and Archer group sent to rescue the hunters.
  








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