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Fri Jan 31, 2014 10:26 pm
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megsug says...



Megs is always up to kidnap someone ;)
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Fri Jan 31, 2014 11:51 pm
Ranger51 says...



I like that idea, assuming they know where Beth Ann lives and can get there in time.

...Wait, this literally just now occurred to me. Is everyone in Europe? o.o It is called the European (etc) League, and most of the characters are at its headquarters... it just didn't occur to me because I'm American, so naturally everything should take place here in 'Murica! xD But it might be an interesting complication if some of our characters are on different continents.
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 2:03 am
AfterTheStorm says...



I'm American too, but for this purpose I'm European. Haha xD
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 4:05 am
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Ranger51 wrote:But how would the YWSers know he's there? They don't really have a real-life task force like EVIL does....


What gave you that idea?
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 6:25 am
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Griffinkeeper says...



@TimmyJake, my last post was aimed at you. The moment Charles accesses the file from AfterTheStorm's computer, he'll find more than he bargained for.
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 1:30 pm
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Rydia can definitely turn up at Beth Ann's house not long after Grif. She could have easily used her admin powers to track where Beth accesses YWS through her IP address and then she would ask around in that area and find the right house.

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Sat Feb 01, 2014 2:30 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



Y'all, it's Beth Ann. Haha Just for future reference. xP
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 2:32 pm
TimmyJake says...



Sooo... Beth Ann. :P Are you gonna break out of EVIL headquarters?
Awesome post @Griffinkeeper. That was a cool little addition you put in there. EVIL only gets the stuff YWS wants them to get. :D
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 3:04 pm
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It's up to everyone else. Is YWS going to rescue Nate?
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Sat Feb 01, 2014 8:15 pm
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Yes, they'll grab Charlie, and force Nate's location out of him.
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Sun Feb 02, 2014 3:43 pm
AfterTheStorm says...



*grabs the popcorn* This story is getting exciting! ^-^
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Sun Feb 02, 2014 7:17 pm
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TimmyJake says...



So I hope my last post turned out ok... I wanted Timmy to come into this somehow... but I didn't want to juggle two characters. So Timmy is now against YWS? He doesn't sound like a nice guy. xD
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Sun Feb 02, 2014 9:51 pm
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Inkpot says...



Wow the story is AMAZING so far, guys. I just read it all through and the writing throughout this is fantastic. I'm soooooo sorry I haven't posted yet, life got a bit on top of me recently, but I'll try and post tomorrow. This is getting to be a really great storybook!
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Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:20 am
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Grif has done a little bit of improvising.

His plan is simple: gain access to E.V.I.L's high level security block. To do this, he needs a high ranking YWS official @Rydia and an actual member of E.V.I.L. who is silly enough to believe whatever Grif tells him @TimmyJake.

Until Grif can sneak Adelaide into the E.V.I.L computer mainframe, he'll simply claim that he is on a top secret mission for E.V.I.L. and anyone that interferes in his mission will be summarily executed. With any luck, no one will get wise until Grif is inside the inner sanctum, at which point the rescue operation can commence.

Additional notes:

  • Adelaide has nothing in common with robots. Her voice isn't robotic, her mannerisms are exactly like you would find on any regular human, with a few exceptions. She tends to be extremely logical than most people and she is also less emotionally oriented than most people.
  • If Adelaide and Grif need to talk, they can do so privately, without having to broadcast it where anyone can here it.
  • Rydia may or may not understand Grif's plan at first. It may be better if she doubts Grif at first.
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Mon Feb 03, 2014 12:39 pm
Inkpot says...



In my post, Blake has just walked up to the house of a friend of his. @Iggy could that friend be you? I thought our characters could do some YWS-saving together? What do ya say?
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