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@Clarity. Ok then. I wasn't worried about it not working out or anything, I was just curious is all.

I was working on the post and had posted it, but AD's post beat me to the punch. I decided to just post it as it is and hope people just work with it.

Just posted, (sorry I took so long, my schedule's been a really strange and demented creature as of late) let me know if I need to edit anything.

Ah hah hah. Yikes. What is this monster you have created? I'm really busy tommorow, but I should have a post up by monday. I'll try and get some consistency in there though.*

*PS, Eli doesn't actually have a cell. That was a point I was going to use later on. And what happened to our run-away and the blood-message in the woods?

Okay, I posted.

I also had an idea. Once it gets to the point where Lys actually accepts all of this, she could see Amanda's spirit? As long as she actually is dead and the body Eli found wasn't real... I dunno. XD

@Clarity, I have an idea I wanted to talk to you about. Hit me up on chat or PM me when you get a chance, though I'd rather we chat about it.

@Eli

Sorry about that. *edits post*

@Em 's all good.

And yeah, the body Eli found was real, so Amanda's spirit COULD possibly still be hanging around... although you'd probably want to get to it before Silus.

EloquentDragon wrote:@Em 's all good.

And yeah, the body Eli found was real, so Amanda's spirit COULD possibly still be hanging around... although you'd probably want to get to it before Silus.

Could, I do have to explain time inconsistency because Amanda was said to be dead for a night at least. But Andrea saw her dropping off Mike that same day.

Well if any thinks Lys seeing Amanda's spirit is a good thing, say aye. XD

Aye.

Avalon wrote:
Could, I do have to explain time inconsistency because Amanda was said to be dead for a night at least. But Andrea saw her dropping off Mike that same day.

No inconsistency, really. Just add a time skip in between the meeting and when Eli found the body.

Working on a post right now. Posted.

EloquentDragon wrote:

Avalon wrote:
Could, I do have to explain time inconsistency because Amanda was said to be dead for a night at least. But Andrea saw her dropping off Mike that same day.

No inconsistency, really. Just add a time skip in between the meeting and when Eli found the body.

There's could only be an hour between Amanda appearing at the football field and her being found dead at the mill. Poison does not work as it does, Silas is probably still at his church and that man is old and not going to be at the mill and back within an hour.

He's got a point there. The Snake Dude can't cover that much ground in such a short amount of time the same way a snake can. The potency of venom varies from the species of venomous snake. Amanda would have to be poisoned by a rather highly venomous snake on Silas' orders, if it was possible to find such a snake in the US.