Young Writers Society

Yes, sorry I did not get this up sooner. Hello Kat. I changed your character's wish just a touch because it must be something that the council (all-powerful ruling group I mentioned earlier) can do for her. Don't worry though, she still wants to make friends and not be the same as her parents. I suppose I did not clarify enough.
Thanks for catching that!

Just a suggestion, (I may have just missed this when I read it) you should add more detail to the contest. I'm still missing some parts of the tournament, such as how the tournament will happen, why they want to enter the tournament, what is the purpose of the tournament, what is the prize of the tournament, and who is judging the tournament. That will make it more clear and most likely get more people to join this storybook. It's fine how it is just some suggestions to make it better. Like I said earlier I may have just missed all this information. I'm not trying to be rude or anything so please don't think I am.

Edit: I read the first paragraph and already saw who is judging the tournament and what the prize is.

Thanks! I'll try to make everything a little clearer then.

What we should do is once we get some more PC's(playable characters) we should keep them until the very end and eliminate the NPC's(non-playable characters) first. That way we can keep this going on longer.

I'm definitely going to do that when I compose the Duel form. Unless I get a request by someone to fight someone else earlier, which I doubt.
How many people do you think I should cut it off at?

We should start posting the actually story at 10 then let people keep joining.

Before I forget! There are 5 days of demonstration rounds. Please pick a day and approximate time and post it so that we know who we can mention.

Verde's demonstration will take place on day one around noon.

I will write my post today because I have a snow day!

My power show thing will be on day two, 3:00.

If my post is like I said I was coughing and I have not gotten very much sleep lately because I am sick .

That's okay, we all get sick sometimes.
And great job! I never thought of astronomical magic before, so I like how it is! Besides, I'm sure you'll fix anything you don't like later, so no complaints!

I just read my other post and it is missing words. Well that's the worst parts of being sick. Plus I couldn't really think of things to write.

We shouldn't go farther than the first round until more people join the storybook. I was going to say that earlier but I forgot.

Hey sunwater! Your character has been approved. I'm looking forward to seeing how you visualize Marsh's magic! Oh, and you can go ahead and post your magic demo bit. No need to wait.