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Wed Mar 05, 2014 3:42 am
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Robusto says...



Thanks. I shall get right on that.
  





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Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:13 am
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Ciblio says...



More people! \(^.^\)
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



previously:
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Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:01 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Thanks Basil! I shall post my character soon, but it involved a bit of work to develop. One I have submitted it, and if it is approved, I shall find some way of putting him in the plot.
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Wed Mar 05, 2014 10:37 pm
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TakeThatYouFiend says...



There you go @BasiltheCat an awful lot of reading for you! :-) I will post as much as plot, personal circumstance and SB rules allow!
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Thu Mar 06, 2014 3:40 am
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Robusto says...



I must ask, how did I do? This is my first story book, and if anyone has any suggestions or plot ideas, I am completely open to them.
  





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Thu Mar 06, 2014 7:51 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



This is my idea to insert me into the plot, if you don't mind.
Being a trainer, da boss (whose name o can't spell) is reluctant to send me on a mission. However I (and possibly some NPCs) will go out looking should there be a sign of trouble i.e. failed radio contact when it is expected.
Sound o.k.?
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Thu Mar 06, 2014 10:30 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Ya did fine Robusto! :-)
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Fri Mar 07, 2014 12:43 pm
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Craz says...



Okay, since it's now a Friday, I'll be able to post when I get home.
"we'll fasten it with some safety pins and tape and a dream, and you're good to go, honey."
  





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Fri Mar 07, 2014 2:40 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Thanks for the feed! :-)
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Sat Mar 08, 2014 3:20 pm
Craz says...



@winterbites and @shinethroughthedark are you guys okay with Charlie finding them a little sooner, or would you rather have that happen later? If the latter, I'll edit it so the people are NPCs.
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Sat Mar 08, 2014 8:52 pm
Ciblio says...



I'm perfectly fine with how you did it. No need to change anything.
'we have lingered in the chambers of the sea /
by sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown /
till human voices wake us, and we drown'



previously:
GuyFieri
  





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Sun Mar 09, 2014 11:15 pm
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Alpacalypse says...



Every time I see this SB, I think it's my username. I am sorely disappointed when I realize that it isn't. :(
  





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Mon Mar 10, 2014 12:47 am
winterbites says...



I'm fine
I've got you under a spell and I don't think I'll be letting you out~ If Only She Knew Voodoo Like I Do, Get Scared.
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2014 12:35 am
Robusto says...



If anyone wants their character to be involved in my characters plotline, just let me know.
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:28 am
Basil says...



Excellent posts everyone I'm loving this!! I'll be moving in with my Mum soon and I'll be able to post then!! Hopefully today or tomorrow! XD But I'm loving all these posts keep going everyone!!
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  








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