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The Selection DT



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Fri Nov 22, 2013 10:10 pm
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EllaBliss says...



About my storybook, The Selection. If you'd like to discuss it please do post here.
Last edited by EllaBliss on Fri Jan 03, 2014 10:58 pm, edited 4 times in total.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 1:55 am
Bugslake says...



You may want to put a link to the DT from the storybook page. I wanted to check the DT but I had a hard time finding a link.
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 2:02 am
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EllaBliss says...



I did that before dinner today, which was about 5:00 EST time :)
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:15 pm
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Auxiira says...



Checking in
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I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:28 pm
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The prince reporting to duty.
• previously ChildOfNowhere
- they/them -
literary fantasy with a fairytale flavour
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:33 pm
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EllaBliss says...



When will the profiles be posted?
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:35 pm
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Auxiira says...



Done and I'm pestering Ri.
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:42 pm
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Elinor says...



Do I have to be a contestant? Could I be the prince's sister?

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

-- Walt Disney
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:44 pm
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EllaBliss says...



@ Aux Oh, I thought you were going to be one of the potential princesses/competitors in The Selection?

@ Elina All princesses borne from the king and queen are sold to other countries, it's a fact from the book. Sorry.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:47 pm
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Auxiira says...



I am, no? She's just from caste 6, that's all.
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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:48 pm
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EllaBliss says...



You said she's a maid in the gardens. I got confused.

Edit: And she's caste seven you said. Or should I fix that for you? I also suggest replacing works with worked. Once she leaves the selection, she will need a new job because of a new caste.
Last edited by EllaBliss on Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:51 pm
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Auxiira says...



Fraggle, I meant caste 8 - gardener >.> sorry, it's almost midnight for me...
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:58 pm
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Caste eight is untouchables, jobless homeless people. I think seven is what you meant.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:00 pm
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Auxiira says...



...seven, yeah... I should probably go to bed soon...
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

I wanted all to sparkle and dance in a glorious jubilee. - Cathy, Wuthering Heights
  





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Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:03 pm
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EllaBliss says...



*Shrugs*
I'm an idiot every hour. I'm okay.
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  








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