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Fri Jan 17, 2014 5:02 am
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What... just... happened?

(MERMAIDS? WHAT? I didn't sign up for this... lmao)

And yeah, how exactly ARE you going to get Dillon into the water?
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Fri Jan 17, 2014 11:38 am
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Fri Jan 17, 2014 5:40 pm
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I'm with ElouqentDragon. who exactly are we supposed to meet up with anyway? More mermaids?
  





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Fri Jan 17, 2014 5:42 pm
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Mermaids? Water? Yeah, what exactly are the Fires going to do? xD I highly doubt they will appreciate being doused...
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Fri Jan 17, 2014 6:17 pm
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Basic concept is that we have to move through the water continent and eradicate Karzai's influence here. And yes, mermaids, or people of the water continent. They have fins and gills and tails. It's all very cool.

We have to meet up with the king and get our weapons ^^
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Fri Jan 17, 2014 6:21 pm
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Who wants to be with my character?
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:23 am
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*Is still trying to understand how "cool" and "mermaids" can be used in the same sentence. X_x.)*

More importantly, how are we going to "pair up" when there should be three people to one water person? I guess we all form groups then... I'll be with whoever. This should get out characters closer, I guess. That should be nice.
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:25 am
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Dude mermaids are totally cool. They drown people for fun. So scary. Mermaids will ruin your life.
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:27 am
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That was only on that one really bad pirate movie...
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:27 am
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HEY MERMAIDS ARE COOL OKAY

*loves my Ariel* <3

anyways, yes, groups. If you have to be technical, Elo. *squints and glares*

Post! Just get yourself and a Water/Air into the water. Airs will have a bubble around themselves and their partners and Waters turn into mermaids and.. help you breathe. Yeah. That's it. They basically are like your bubble >_>

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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:32 am
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Why, exactly, are we going into the water? And more importantly, where? And how long is that air bubble going to last? And how are the Waters going to do anything to help when they're swimming around outside of it?
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 5:47 am
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1) Well they can't really do much in the way of progression unless they actually go into the Water Continent, now can they? Above sea level is just a tourist attraction, but you can't really expect people of the water continent to live on land.

2) To the King's Palace ultimately, but mostly there's one of Karzai's minions down there that we have to defeat. We don't stay in the Continent's long. Our main goal is Karzai so it's an in and out sort of deal.

3) As long as the Air's can hold them up. But long enough. There are a lot of non-natives that visit the water continent so there are venues under the water that accommodate those of us who wont grow fins and tails when submerged.

4) Outside of what? I'm not sure what you're referencing there, but the Water's belong here. This is basically their origin. And they can control water so they're fine. They get advantages here in sense of strength and ability. They'll probably be looking out for the others more than anything.
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 6:25 am
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Reise, do you remember what weapons the Waters will get from the King who I have secretly dubbed Triton? ;)

Actually, do you remember all of their weapons?

(This is kinda like Zelda.. the Continents are temples, the Karzai minions are like the temple bosses, and the weapons are like what you equip to help you go farther into the game... if that dorky comparison helps it make more sense)
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 6:27 am
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I actually do ^^

Waters got wands. Fires got swords. Earths got knuckles. Airs got staffs.

EDIT: Water's got trident points that acted as wands. Basically the same thing. They store an unlimited source of water inside so they never run out.

Fire's got swords and daggers that wont melt when they direct fire through them.

Earth's got gloves and brass knuckles. Mainly they make them stronger and makes it easier to handle the earth.

Airs just get staffs. Think Aang.
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Sat Jan 18, 2014 6:44 am
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That's all Air gets? A friggin' staff? That disappoints me :/ Also: Why is there no one to play Karzai?
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