Young Writers Society

@TheMessenger, sorry:/ easy to get carried away…

OK, I am waiting for Cailey to post. Remember, I want a variety here of posts from different users.

we seem to be kinda moving in circles y'all. just sayin'...

What do you mean?

well, we don't really seem to be establishing anything or getting anywhere...idk...

So now Torkon is standing outside alone.

So I was thinking either someone could come out for a conversation and therefore some more character development, or maybe something could happen to him and we could get a bit more plot in there.

What do you think @TheMessenger any ideas of a little plot twist here?

Also, do we get to know any more of the plot? Like what the object is or what kind of creatures the monsters are?

Well our characters do need to meet other people, and it would be impossible for them to not. As far as plot twists go I am not sure yet. But we do need to move it along. I'm working on how things will progress. The metal thing is actually a super-duper walkie-talkie/ phone. As you will soon find out, on the other end is the lord in the very first post. So, Paul is speaking into it and the lord may reveal some stuff.

@TheMessenger, what is the language the lizard spoke? Is that supposed to mean something, or is it something random you thought of for him to say?

It's the lizard language. Our characters don't understand it.

ah...

@ajruby12 and @PeanutPheobe, can you chat on here vs the SB?

Ok, sorry...

So... does anyone want to come out and talk to Torkon? It would have to be someone who isn't busy helping Paul use the walkie talkie thing.

Hmm...i guess I can, what do you have in mind?

I don't know, but I feel like so far Torkon is just the random older guy who sometimes speaks but has really only interacted with Paul.

It would be nice to have a little bit of character development while we wait for the Messenger to reveal the next piece of plot.