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Tue Jan 21, 2014 1:09 pm
Basil says...



Alrighty then!!
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Tue Jan 21, 2014 11:09 pm
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OK, officially Miles is not dead. Due to me missing a section of Andraya's post I didn't see that the door was caved in. So @Iggy and I will both be revising our last posts. *Troops off to do so*
  





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Tue Jan 21, 2014 11:12 pm
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Troops off. Messy you are so adorable it hurts.
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Wed Jan 22, 2014 3:26 am
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Ok, I'm having a seriously terrible mental blank ... which character is left handed??
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
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Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Wed Jan 22, 2014 5:08 pm
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Probably Miles.
  





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Wed Jan 22, 2014 5:20 pm
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Just so you all know, this SB is the bomb! I am enjoying this so much and happy to see that it is still progressing.
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2014 4:16 am
Iggy says...



@basilthecat and @Messenger, I rewrote my post. You can read it here - http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=98865&start=30#p1185721

I look forward to seeing Andraya's next post, Basil, :)
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:35 am
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I liked it a lot Iggy Marco is funny, even though he appears tough.
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:38 am
Sassafras says...



I think we should have a small discussion about where this is going because everyone seems to know what's going on except me xD And every time I come to write I have to stop because I don't know what to say.
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:43 am
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I agree. I was actually just thinking of that. It seems like the major climax is over. Everyone has just about met up. (Side note: Wouldn't someone at least think about killing Morgan in Basil's last post? He is there enemy who is ruthlessly chasing them. )

I am thinking we should run into a group of rescue crew members or something. Something big needs to happen. So far it's just been survive.
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2014 5:47 am
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Well isn't that what the whole SB's about? Surviving. There's so much happening and so quickly. We're burning through ideas here and I just think there's a small bit of cool down needed before another major thing.

Maybe small conflicts and no more attacks.

Just a suggestion.
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:08 am
Basil says...



I agree with Reise! Something simple. We should also add in a little more humour, I think.
And @Messenger because Morgan was struck in the face with a plank of wood and fell down the stairs, it would have been assumed that he's dead. I don't know if @Craz has anything in mind, so I left Morgan's "death" vague.
@Iggy good post! I'll have something up after someone else posts ;)
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2014 12:05 pm
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Craz says...



Unless everyone agrees that the Storybook should end shortly after everyone is together, I had an idea that the group should start looking for a refuge camp. Since the majority of characters are seeking family members, I would think the refuge camp would hold something more than just safety. Depending on if we want to go further than that, the camp can be in horrible condition or just the rescue our characters need. But I do agree on the more internal conflict within the group.

@BasiltheCat what do you think about once everyone is together that Andraya goes after Gale because of Jet?
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Fri Jan 24, 2014 12:52 pm
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I like that idea of a refuge camp!!

But Craz, I don't know what you mean by Andraya going after Gale because of Jet. If anything, Andraya would thank Gale for keeping her brother alive.
Dorian, are you the one adding all the spices to our food?
Of course I am.
Why?
Because frankly the food here tastes like poorly cooked sawdust. It genuinely tastes how Solas looks.
  





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Fri Jan 24, 2014 3:27 pm
Craz says...



Well, I thought that she would partly blame him because his former group did nearly kill Jet. Not forever, but just when they first meet.
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