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Thu Aug 29, 2013 10:55 pm
Hannah says...



Also if you want to linger on the same moment longer, you are welcome to do so with your own post.
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Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:48 am
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You can't make me do things!
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Wed Sep 04, 2013 4:51 am
Aley says...



-rallies with Penguin-
  





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Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:55 pm
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Just some clarity, we're running with the lad disappearing after a party. :D
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Yep! Just in case it wasn't clear, I went ahead and chose the disappearance cause of death for our other character since there was no real discussion toward choosing it. We're creative people and we can work with it, right?

So I imagine she's, around this time, joining search parties for him and having that feeling of just really not knowing where he is and whether or not he's dead, etc.

Obviously there's also stress that is present in Pinguini's latest poem: of people in the place where life is still going on as usual asking her about the tragedy that they can't understand -- did you know him well? etc.

So a basic timeline to work through that could use smaller steps in between
-- searching
-- giving up hope
-- moving on
-- discovering the body (not her personally)
-- suspecting foul play etc.
-- realizing eventually it was his own darn fault
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Sat Sep 14, 2013 7:42 am
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Can I just pop in to say this is absolutely amazing and beautiful and we should keep this when this is done and I'd like to join in when I can.

Just outstandingly beautiful. I'd love to be a part of it.
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Sat Sep 14, 2013 7:45 am
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My love, join in right now! < 3 @thewritersdream YOU MUST!
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Sat Sep 14, 2013 8:21 am
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Did it, please tell me if you want anything changed/edited. I don't mind. : )
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Sat Sep 14, 2013 4:03 pm
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Lumi says...



Your post was lovely <3
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