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Tue Jul 30, 2013 12:33 am
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Jonathan says...



And I'm back.
There seems to be nothing written here. :shock:
  





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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:05 pm
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StoneHeart says...



Okay guys, we ARE NOT letting this SB die if it's the last thing I do.

@barefootrunner

@kayfortnight

Good posts, both of you! What is it that the Derns are going to the island for, kay? And barefoot, my next post'll see Ether your way.

@Aquestioning, You've got what you need now, NO MORE EXCUSES! ;D

@Carina we need an intro post to know what we're working with!

@DiskElemental intro post? Random post?

@KatKage ,I'm going to post for Wreath here and start integrating you in a bit.

You got what you need guys, now let's GO!

P.s. @Camulaeus appears to be no longer available, so his profile is now up for dibs!

Oh, and it appears the @VeerenVKS is no longer interested . . .
Last edited by StoneHeart on Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:14 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:10 pm
umaima says...



Hey! what about me? You didn't even mention me :'(
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:14 pm
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veeren says...



or me :'c
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:16 pm
StoneHeart says...



Look again Mr. VKS.

And @umaima @Jonathan and @jon7670 are all good >> Nothing to tell them :P
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:22 pm
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veeren says...



oh much better
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 7:25 pm
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umaima says...



I am still angry (*folds hands*)
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:11 pm
Carina says...



I haven't forgotten about this, I promise. I just haven't really found an inspiration to post at the moment, and this week is kind of busy for me. But like I said, I have not forgotten about this, and I will try to get a post in as soon as I can!
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:23 pm
kayfortnight says...



We're going to the island to recruit Aq's character:) I made it so a group including my character would be going to the island to convince him to come. Better than a group of NPCs going, right?
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 8:51 pm
StoneHeart says...



Quite right kay!

Okay Carina! Sounds good!
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I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:52 pm
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KatKage says...



Yay! Intro! XD

Just a few things though:
1 He isn't wearing armor <u>'' (Wasn't wearing any when he escaped and doesn't need it in the first place o3o (*pffft,* kidding about that last bit. He probably just never thought to get some anyway <u>)) Perhaps instead she could notice the bandages all over his right arm? :3 *shrugs* X3

2 He doesn't have a sword <u> (He has no skill with one anyway) He does, however, have a knife/dagger thing :3 That would make the situation he was in more of a realistic threat to his life, no? :3,

3 Who is the other guy? <u> Human, or Dern? <u>'' *Wants to be sure for her post :3*

(*This bit is more speculation than a problem or anything <u>'''*)
4 *Isn't sure if Ash would have hardened his expression <u>* Like, I think he may try but he'd probably look more scared than anything <u> (His body language would flash more as 'coward' than 'warrior', although I do like that Wreath thought that :3 I also like that She noticed the curiosity in his face when he first saw her XD *Not Bad o3o*)

Sorry for Nitpicking!!! <u>'' *can be quite a nitpicker when it comes to her characters <u>''''''* You don't have to change anything if you don't want to ''X3 (*imagines all the other SBers reading her post like 'Why is she being so picky? o3o' <u>''* Sorry to everyone!! <u>'''''')

And: SORRY (AGAIN)!!!! <u>'''''''' I've been given too many hours at work <u>'''' I haven't been able to finish my other characters <u>'''' Sorry!!!! <u>''' I'll post for Ash when I finish my last character!! <u>'''' *Twill be epic o3o* I'll get them done as soon as I have time <u>''
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Sat Aug 03, 2013 5:27 am
StoneHeart says...



Wow, that there came closest to a SB post review as I've ever seen . . . but thanks. I'm glad you did it!

The' post won't be half as awesome as you, or half as crazy as your use of punctuation.

So, in reply:

1. Bandages are noticeable! Good note!

2. The dagger works.

3. I was thinking human Warrior (magically enhanced abilities).

4. Too complicated to mess with -_-

Thanks again!
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I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

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Sat Aug 03, 2013 6:44 am
KatKage says...



Sorry!!! <u>'''' *Hopes she didn't offend or anything <u>''''*

Spoiler! :
And sorry about the punctuation + whatnots <u>'''' *Tries to convert things like body language, facial expression and tone of voice into her replies online and what not to make them sound more personal, so she tends to have crazy punctuation and symbol use <u>''*

(Plus writing in the third person helps make it both easier to explain myself + gives the illusion of reading, which I bet most of us here are used to, so one can imagine me as realistically as a character in a book, so I'm not impersonal :3 (*Tis impossible for her not to be expressive in everything she says and even types <u>*))


^ I kinda ranted off topic so I put it in a spoiler <u>'''' You don't have to read it or anything <u>''' Sorry!!! <u>'''''

Anywho, thank you for reading it! XD and Yeah, I thought he'd be a magically enhanced human :3 *makes sense since Dern seem to travel together mostly and what not X3* And yeah, number 4 was just me ranting about specifics on characters <u>'' *Loves those little tid-bits /u\*

Anyway! *Will post soon X3* *Will shoot for Monday o3o* (Or tomorrow, if I'm lucky ''X3)
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Sat Aug 03, 2013 7:16 pm
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StoneHeart says...



Monday's awesome, and ranting is great.

Plus: Your style is unique and cool. I love it.
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. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sat Aug 03, 2013 7:17 pm
barefootrunner says...



Okay, Sigma's escaped! Coming your way :)
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