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Mon Oct 14, 2013 10:22 pm
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Mon Oct 14, 2013 10:26 pm
KingLucifer says...



I have a sub-plot in mind for my character, so why not come up with sub-plots for your characters?
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Mon Oct 14, 2013 10:27 pm
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Wait what
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Tue Oct 15, 2013 2:19 am
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Hey guys. Hey. Um, I am just the messenger. But, uh. Here.
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Tue Oct 15, 2013 2:21 am
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Oh, also. Co-leaders? Dante is already one but you guys know way more about this than I do. :)
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Tue Oct 15, 2013 11:18 am
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Sunshine says...



Oh... that escalated quickly.

Guys, individual subplots is a great idea, but can only keep a storybook for so long. I think one light overall plot would help things move without destroying subplot like the Juggernaut's threatened to do. Example: Wild metal dragon loose in the woods type light plot. Are we gong to meet any minor Gods; what is going to happen to keep this interesting seriously needs to be considered.
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