Young Writers Society

Littleauthor could you rethink your characters outfit. It's the 1950's. Jeans and tshirt are not appropriate

Nice catch. I completely forgot that clothes would be a little different back then. Tell me if anything in mine is an anachronism.

CowLogic wrote:Nice catch. I completely forgot that clothes would be a little different back then. Tell me if anything in mine is an anachronism.

It is nothing but transcendent.
You might like an accent on your Surname to make it more French

Innocenté

Hey, checking in. Tell me if I have any anachronisms.

heheh.. HEHEH.... AHAH..MUAHAHAH...!!!

Sorry; always wanted to be an evil scientist.

crazycraz wrote:heheh.. HEHEH.... AHAH..MUAHAHAH...!!!

Sorry; always wanted to be an evil scientist.

I love it! Shes actually really closed to how I imagined the scientist to be too!

So far I really love every-ones characters.

Blackwood wrote:
So far I really love every-ones characters.

Especially mine....

^ you didn't do an appearance description for Boston.

You didn't ask for one

Then I will take it as open for interpretation.

I could make one XD but you didn't put anything in your character template requesting information on appearance. I suggest you go and fix it.

Alright, hi again. You aren't going to have any problem with me keeping up; I obsessively click the notifications button every time I get one.

Lol I'm the same with notifications.

Anyway I think I will write up my proposal for that important thing now.

Turn order
Because this storybook was inspired by a board game I thought that everyone posting all over the place might get a bit confusing. So I have some proposals.
1. Each suspects post must be alternated with either a post from christophe or Boston. Example: [christophe] [suspect] [Boston] [suspect] [C or B][ suspect]. Whoever posts next should be appropriate to what was hinted in the last post. Eg. If Boston says he is going to visit bobbi the milkman then bobbi should post

2. Abdoloute turn order is decided.(there is a particular order)


3. Abdoloute turn order + 1. (Christophe and Boston posting between order)

4. Random turn order. Anyone can post in any order but everyone must have posted
before you can post again.

5. Random turn order+ 1.

6. Normal storybook. Anyone posts.


Lay your vote. Personally I like 1 and 5. The difference being with 1. You don't have to wait untill everyone posts first.

The disadvantage of these is that if two characters want to intereact and plot it would be quite spread out. That may not be a full disadvantage but we could add exceptions to any of the above of you request it on DT

I like one personally, two is cool, but it causes you and I to be particularly active, and it wouldn't be fair to everyone else.

EDIT: Turn this the other way around. I like two.

Oh also! I forgot to add, any other suggestions just post it and label it 7. or something.