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How Long Should it Take for Aurora and Christian to fall in Love?

Poll ended at Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:23 pm

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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:16 pm
PixieStix says...



:) Yeah. Sophia wants to show off her fighting skills! :P haha.
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:23 pm
PixieStix says...



We should start :P
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:26 pm
LanaBrown says...



I like that idea too but they are humans in a castle full of powerful vamps. I think that maybe we should have Aurora meet Christian on a mission and then a little later they get captured and Aurora discovers that Christian is the vampire prince and the rebels save them when they're not that many vampires in the castle and Christian tries to find a way to see Aurora again. Yes there are pacifist but I don't know when they will be back on so if they do they can add themselves to the story later. Of course I do not mean 2/3 weeks our time. I means 2/3 weeks SB time. Yes vampires have taken over America (is it sick that I wouldn't mind this happening in real life and that I would side with the vampires.) In this environment the world is pretty much in ruins and smushed together so you can get anywhere by train, bus, and car. Hope I covered everything. Somebody can start us off.
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:30 pm
RoryLegend says...



I've already half written a post of Nicholas being captured in the castle. How about he was the target, take out the rebel leader type thing (the vamps can plan to eat him later or something) and Christian and Aurora meet while she is trying to save her father?

Also, can the vamps come out in the sunlight? It might be a little unfair if they can..
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:38 pm
LanaBrown says...



I like that idea. Yes they can come out in sunlight, but they are weaker in it.
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:43 pm
PixieStix says...



Can you start us off?
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:47 pm
VampireSenshi512 says...



let's say they're substantially weaker in the sunlight. And there's this funky thick cloud cover that covers the sun for a miles radius of the castle
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:48 pm
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Yeah. I'll start us off.
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 9:50 pm
VampireSenshi512 says...



yay!
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Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:02 pm
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Yay!
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Tue Feb 21, 2012 10:20 pm
LanaBrown says...



Guys I think we should slow down a little and start writing longer post. They don't have to be essay sized just like maybe like I don't know but not like one or two sentences. I think if we write longer post then it will make the story line more interesting, oh and we could try to slow down for the others sake. Please and Thank You.
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Tue Feb 21, 2012 11:31 pm
PixieStix says...



Alright :) I'm trying to bring in others characters.
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Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:28 pm
Redfang18 says...



At least we're still going on pretty good. Maybe the rebels could also snag Draco because he once lived in the castle and on account of the death of a child forty years ago. Before Pixie2 starts bugging me about it, the child that Draco accidentally murdered wasn't Sophia. I was thinking maybe a child of ten years of age and male. You guys decide the name of the child and work your way from there. I'll just roll with it.
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Fri Mar 09, 2012 4:30 pm
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? Okay?
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Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:19 am
LanaBrown says...



I don't think I quite understand what you are proposing Redfang18. Would you please explain?
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