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Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:18 pm
VampireSenshi says...



Hey Guys!

I'm very sorry to report that I may not have enough space in my schedule to deal with another storybook, I made the mistake of trying to participate in like five. Once again, very sorry.

I give rights to SkyeDragon to kill my character...

REALLY SORRY GUYS!!!
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:58 am
SkyeDragon says...



Alright, I guess you're mine...(laughs maniacally)
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:19 am
Stellabeam says...



Redfang, so what are your plans with Cinderwich? Because I thought she was bad or does your character not know that yet? Pixie- is there a reason bella is talking to me? Dragongirl- Any specific plans?
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:21 am
SkyeDragon says...



If it could be possible, could we start a battle out of this? Like, turn the tables, Baltazar is defending his kin, though she's evil. What if she used him to allow herself to slip away, into the town or something or other? Just food for thought.
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:23 am
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DragonGirl11 says...



What I want to know, does Baltazar realize Cinderwitch is evil? Because she's planning to play him to get the gold, even if she completely crushes his heart.
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:46 am
Stellabeam says...



I like the battle idea but not the idea of me fighting against two dragonborns my character might be a huge royal pain right now but i'm not sure how she'll fare like that. I think Cinderwitch should get Baltzazr to fight me and he not realizing she's evil does it. She then escapes and he realizes he was tricked? I don't think Baltazar realizes that Cinderwitch is bad and is just defending her because Aayta is a brat. Right now I'm unsure of what to do next
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 2:47 am
SkyeDragon says...



Same.
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 3:30 am
PixieStix says...



Same.
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 3:58 am
Stellabeam says...



same the confused part or the battle part?
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Thu Mar 01, 2012 1:10 pm
DragonGirl11 says...



I completely agree with Stella's post. If nobody's posted in the SB in 6 hours, I'll be able to get things going in that direction. (Cinder getting Baltazar to fight Aatya)
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Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:34 am
GoofySmurf says...



I added a secret entrance and thats how i get into the hut.
Ehh, who knows what to put here anymore.
  





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Fri Mar 02, 2012 1:53 am
DragonGirl11 says...



Umm... you mentioned something about a villan's lair... Baltazar's a good guy...
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Fri Mar 02, 2012 2:02 am
GoofySmurf says...



what crap
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Fri Mar 02, 2012 2:17 am
DragonGirl11 says...



The villains' lair would be deep in the forest. I'd say a cave or underground maybe, but whatever.
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Wed Mar 07, 2012 1:14 am
DragonGirl11 says...



Hey Skyedragon? I have a question. I was opperating under the assumption that this was in an old kinda fantasy type setting (hence the arrow to the wing) but you mentioned cameras when locking up Bella. Care to clarify?
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