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Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:28 pm
ReisePiecey says...



Okay, discuss.
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:01 pm
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Thanks Reise!

Ok, so, what do we think will be happening to Kayli, Francie, Hayden, Trina, and Lorcan, guys? Will they be hostage for long? Will they escape? Will they be rescued?
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:10 pm
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I don't know, I just thought it'd bring the plot along nicely. But I do have a brilliant idea!

I think we should make these two teams rivals throughout the whole SB. Like in the end our team and this scarlet-eyed dude's team are the last two surviving teams. We can fight other teams, be these guys should be our arch enemies type of guys. You know what I mean? And the media can do the whole "The epic battle between Blue and Red." Cause, you know, our leader's name is Blue, and this other guy has red eyes. We could even make a big thing out of it, like maybe Blue and this guy know each other from the past Toy Box and have a history.
So whaddaya think? Yay or nay?
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:43 pm
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Well Iike the idea of what the media are saying ^_^

Well, I think if they *do* escape, they'll probably have been stripped of most of their weapons. By the time they escape, they'll still be lost and someone on the same team could be mistaken for an enemy and get killed, splitting up our team etc etc.

I really don't mind. I'm intrigued to see the next posts!




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Wed Jan 11, 2012 3:08 pm
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I kind of agree with both, Mickey and Dragonette. I really think our team should split somewhere in the middle (like here), and fight of the rest of the other teams (as two separate teams.). Then, when it comes back to the Red Team, we all re-unit.

But, frankly speaking, I really do not want anyone to die from our team. Severely wounded, yeah sure. Die? No...
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Wed Jan 11, 2012 4:19 pm
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But dying's inevitable! ;)

Well we could kill off those who have dropped out, I guess. But that'd all depend on Reise's decision and the owners. Who knows, they could use the dropped out characters as a decoy to distract them while we escape perhaps.

If we escape ;D*




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Wed Jan 11, 2012 9:39 pm
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Yeah, I think the characters who have dropped out should die, it's the ideal thing to do.

But I'm not sure we should split up. From what I've seen with past SBs, they normally die after splitting up the plot, it just gets to complected and, well, split.

So I think we should get back together, so there should be a rescue or an escape. Or both. Maybe during their rescue, Kayli and Francie and them should fight back and try to escape.

I don't know. Honestly, I don't think it should be to planned, we should just post and have fun with it. Not knowing what's around each turn. The most fun SBs are like that.

But I guess I don't care, we can try splitting up if you want, it could be worth a try.
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Thu Jan 12, 2012 2:16 am
tgirly says...



I'm with Dragonette; I don't think we should split, at least not now, because it's not really that even when you consider who's dropped out.
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Thu Jan 12, 2012 4:10 pm
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Sadly, most of us did split. Now 8 of us are in the forest. Though, Coral has just spotted all the 5 missing members-- Hayden, Lorcan, Francie, Trina and Kayli. Alia and Angeline on the other side, is together too. And I like Dragonette's idea very much. Its really good. But Ducky's also has a point. Dying is inevitable! Though, I'm not looking forward to dying. Hehe xD Most of us are not. Because if any of us are dead, then we're out of the story. =S Or maybe we die and then souls come back. But that would be just too dramatic? xD Lol.

I don't know. I'm sort of confused. Its all up to you. And if any of you'll want to kill me, then okay. Its totally up to you. :)
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Thu Jan 12, 2012 5:47 pm
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I think that if we were to kill of a character, it would be the ones who dropped out, since they're no use in the story. (Just like you guys said.) In the next couple of posts we should mention them, and then, if the story turns that way, let them die. But of course, with the YWSer's permission.

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Thu Jan 12, 2012 11:03 pm
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I think we should leave it to take it's own course, but in one way or another, we need to get back together. We don't want it like 2 different plots completely, as it'll just get confusing.

Since no one of the dropped out members have been captured, I think an idea where we use them as decoys would be good. They die off but it's part of the story and nothing random. It also helps how we get out from being caught!




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Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:25 am
tgirly says...



Can't wait to see what happens!
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Sat Jan 14, 2012 12:03 am
tgirly says...



I was here! I just can't post anything 'cause I'm kind of unconscious.
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Sat Jan 14, 2012 9:22 am
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Well, you can regain conscious now, and talk about everything Angeline is seeing. Like the distraction Alia and Jessica caused or, you can make one. Really, anything, 'cause nobody is posting anything now. (They're all kind of busy I guess.)
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Sun Jan 29, 2012 10:16 am
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Blues says...



Um. An elephant wouldn't be too out of place, would it?

Or a toy elephant, maybe. Much more 'in' place. Flown in illegally as revenge for the red-eye team. Yes. Reeeeeeevenge...