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The Basement



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Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:13 pm
SisterItaly says...



Yay for DTness!
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Sun Mar 13, 2011 9:16 pm
Synnoev says...



Haha, I just realised there wasn't one before!

Is there any electricity in the basement?
  





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Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:00 pm
Synnoev says...



The Jordan lookalike is the doctor, right?
  





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Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:06 am
SisterItaly says...



Yup
"Even in the end --even in death-- I can't hate you." - Neri Hereford's last words.

"The Gods demand blood, for they... do not bleed." Jaska.

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Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:35 pm
Kaywiia says...



To answer your question Synnovev:

There is electricity in the basement, but only a few spaces to put plugs. There is one light-bulb on the cieling with a chain you pull to turn it on. This will turn on, for now. Until the light bulb runs out.

Also, to clear a few things up. There is a small, working sink in the corner of the basement behind a matress. Upstairs, on the ground level above the basment is the ruins of a burnt store. All there is is one huge room with burnt down walls. That's why the basment has been ignored.
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Sun Mar 27, 2011 3:48 pm
Synnoev says...



Okay thanks :D

Maybe they can explore it a bit more in a while then.
  





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Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:07 pm
Kaywiia says...



I have a few more things that will be found out later to add to the plot. I'll tell you ahead of time now, but I will start all of the plot-twisters when I feel nessesary.

1) Behind a large stack of matresses there is a really small door with no doorknob, but it can be broken into. On the other side of the door is a small safe with the code 12-03-39. The code is written on the bottom in roman numerals. The safe contains the plans of the building, some legal documents, and nearly $5,000 (about 3,540 EUR for my brittish friends) in cash.

2) If possible a new character will be introduced to the story.

3) The group in the basement are found by a group of people who decide they want the basement for themselves. Or, another version of this idea, a group of cops make it through the city in disguise and stumble upon the basement, and decide to sleep there for a night, unknowing it had other ocupants.

I'll add more once I think of them. I'm not guarenteeing all these will be used, they are just potential ideas.
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Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:35 pm
Synnoev says...



I like the third one :D

Just writing up my reply; it should be up today or tomorrow.
  








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