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Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:54 pm
Dragonette says...



Discuss!
If you have any questions about the story book, or you just simply don't get the plot, just ask! I'm ready for anything that comes at me *Looks at crowbar, water bottle, and bubble rap* Bring it on!
Last edited by Dragonette on Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:46 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:43 pm
Dragonette says...



I'm bored and I have time at the moment, so I'm going to give you guys a list of ideas for Robotic add-ons for you characters, sound good?

~Rocket boots
~Super hearing
~Metallic arms that make you strong
~Metallic legs that give you super speed
~Can shoot out fire of arms
~Arm/legs can extend
~GPS. Never gets lost
~First-aid bot. Contains bandages, ointment, and various remedies.
~Lazer gaze
~Can breath underwater (this would probably be the only Mechanoid that can go underwater, everyone else would rust. He/she would have to have water-proof skin)
~Cleaning bot.
~Climbing. Could climb things like a spider.
~Super sense of smell
~Always can tell the exact time
~Springs that pop out in various parts of your body
~Super taste buds. Can tell what kind of material something is made out of by licking it X)
~Writing bot. Knows every word in the dictionary and has an endless supply of markers, pens, pencils and paper.

So, yeah, just a couple of things to get your imagination going. Remember, you don't have to use these, I was just doing this for fun.
Last edited by Dragonette on Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Why is a raven like a writing desk?

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Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:46 pm
DaSpetsnaz says...



How many add-ons can you have?
"Is this the real life, or is this just fantasy? Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality."

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Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:52 pm
DaSpetsnaz says...



Never mind, I just had a brain fart. :D
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:14 am
Eniarrol says...



Can we have a ability that for example...
Ability to take on the abilities of certain animals.
ect

P.S Tomato is a fruit!! D:
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:36 am
Dragonette says...



An ability? Well I suppose your brain could be programmed for any specific ability.
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:26 pm
Dragonette says...



We've started! Yurriko, you can still post your profile and join.

Ok, so we'll start where everybody's just getting out of their boxes and discovering that they got dumped in one of the largest junk yards in the USA. We're just introducing everybody at the moment. Sound good?
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 1:33 pm
Dragonette says...



Ok guys, I'm not going to be here most of today, so you're on your own. I don't care what you do, but eventually we should head over to the gas station; probably because it starts raining and we need shelter, or because some people *cough* Cy *cough* will be complaining of starvation.
Just remember not to buy water, no one can consume that. If you're thirsty, get a coffee cup and get some oil. :wink:
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Why is a raven like a writing desk?

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Wed Jan 26, 2011 1:00 am
DaSpetsnaz says...



Or get it out of a can. :D
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Wed Jan 26, 2011 1:46 pm
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Okie dokie, DaSpat, let's hear it, what's your brilliant plan? How is Eli getting free?:D
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:54 am
Dragonette says...



I'm sorry guys, but the violence is getting a little out of control. You don't have to change your post, Fiction, but I don't know if it's worth killing the guy, probably not necessary to do it again. They're just police who are doing there job, and since there are little kids in the group...

Also, DaSpat, stealing and blasting the guts out of the police isn't necessary. The storybook is rated E, so keep the violence to a minimum and please delete your last post.

I'm sorry if I'm being harsh, but this wasn't what I'd pictured when I created my SB. I don't doing a bit of butt-whoppin, but no killing please. I'm sorry, I know it's my fault for not putting it in the rules.
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Why is a raven like a writing desk?

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Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:22 pm
Dragonette says...



Ok, so let me get this straight. Gretal, Lily, Cy, Adrian, Eli, and Kaiter are at the camp site, right? And everyone else is...where?
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:42 pm
AllyGrLxOX says...



I thought Bree was at the campsite too....?
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:45 pm
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DaSpetsnaz says...



I say that they got pushed to a different part of the junkyard when the cops came into the campsite.
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Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:51 pm
Dragonette says...



Ally~ Me too, but then Milk thought you guys were all gone? I don't know.

DaSpat~ That sounds good. Okay, so how about this: Everyone that isn't at the campsite now (Gia, Bree, Eden, Enzo, and Achilles) is on the other side of the junkyard. The night before, they all ran off to hide from the cops, and they got lost. So now, they're together, but they're trying to find their way back to the camp site. I know it sounds weird that they would get lost in a junk yard, but this thing is huge, like, miles long, and with all the piles of junk, the thing is like a maze.
So, does that sound good to everybody?

PS. I'm going on vacation, so I'm going to be gone for a while. I'll try to find a computer when I get there.
I'm a JESUS FREAK! (but you can call me a 'Jeek' if you want :D

Why is a raven like a writing desk?

You aren't an official writer unless you're at least slightly mad.
  








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