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Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:33 am
Sassafras says...



Profiles will be posted here. The profile outline below, just in case you forgot.

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Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:34 am
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Name: Vetis

Age: 22

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality: Vetis has a calm and relaxed attitude about most everything. Even when faced with what some may consider danger, he is smiling. Mostly because he knows whatever is in the way he could easily defeat. Though he's usually a go with the flow type of guy, he knows when to be serious. Like when things start to turn out of his teams favor. He's a good leader and is generally a good guy.

Flaws: He hates following orders from others and will always do things his own way. His anger sky rockets when someone tries to tell him what to do. If you say, "Vetis, don't travel through those woods! It's full of poisnous gas!" he would probably just scoff at you and keep walking.

Power: Control over predators.

Weapon: Long sword.

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Apperance: Short and spiked brown-blond hair and lightly tanned skin. He's tall, around 6"2, and has a lean/musclar build. His eyes are sterling grey/blue. He usually wears plain black shirts, a white blazer, black jeans, and boots. Every now and then, he'd throw on a hat.

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History: He was born poor and grew up on the streets of Myrain, a small town. He's pretty much been an assassin all his life. Having to sneak around the village at night and steal food behind the backs of otherwise alert store clerks is pretty good training. One day, while running away from the village guards, he ended up in a forest on the edge of Myrain. Quicker than it took him to get there, he got lost. While searching around aimlessly, he came upon a family of wolves. He froze with fear and stared into the eyes of the biggest wolf. Snarling, it advanced on him. Not knowing what else to do, he yelled out "Please, don't hurt me!" and the wolf stopped dead in its tracks. Confused, Vetis to the wolf to sit and it obeyed that command also. Ever since that moment, Vetis knew he had some type of control over animals. Testing his new found powers even further, he told the mother wolf to give over her youngest cub. She obeyed. Fearing his powers might run out, Vetis took the cub, whose eyes were not even fully opened yet, and ran back to the village. He named the wolf Diable, which means Devil in French. From then on, Diable and Vetis continued their secret raid on Myrain. While stealing meat from the butcher shop, a man appeard silently behind Vetis and, without saying one word, handed him a small card. Vetis, who just finished screaming his head off, took the card slowly and watched as the man walked away. To make an otherwise long story short, Vetis followed directions on the card and traveled to Rengar. While there the man was there too, as promised, and offered Vetis a job as his personal assassin.

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He's five in human years.
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Tue Sep 21, 2010 11:31 am
LovelessSummer says...



I call a female Ave Maria.

Name: Yera

Age: 20

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality:

Flaws: She's blind in her left eye.

Power: Earth element

Weapon: Two emergency daggers strapped to her leg.

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Apperance: Long black hair with light brown streaks in it. She sometimes pulls her hair back in a ponytail. She has smooth brown skin and green/brown eyes. She not really that tall, around five foot five and she has a slim build. She mostly wears tight off-white t-shirts, a black cut off jacket, black jeans with a white belt, and black boots.

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Tue Sep 21, 2010 10:02 pm
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Name: Marissa

Age: 23

Organization: Krowe

Personality: Issa is not much of a fighter. But she is loyal, very loyal. She's a tiny bit frightened, of everything. She's friendly, don't get her wrong, but very quiet. It seems for every good thing about her personality, there is a negitive.

Flaws: Can't swim, often gets herself stuck if she climbs too high, isn't very strong physically.

Power: Speed

Weapon: Small Dagger

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Apperance: She stands at about 5'2", and is a petit, yet very feminine, woman. Her hair flows down until the middle of her back, and it isn't often she'll wear it up. Her eyes aren't both green, she has one green eye and one brown eye, her left eye is the brown one. She has all very slim features, her arms, legs, even her fingers. She doesn't bite her nails, so they are nice and long. She has often been described as one of those girls you are afraid to touch, or she may fall apart.

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History: Her mother left when she was young, leaving her with her father, and four older brothers. It was a hard life for Issa, but she doesn't complain. In fact, she finds she had it easy. When she was told to do something, she did it. She worked without praise or thanks. When her speed was discovered, her father began to lay the work load on thicker. She felt her life served no purpose but to please her family. So, one night, she packed up and left. She slept in the streets of her town for a few days, before she was abducted to serve in the king's gaurd.

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Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:56 am
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Name: Skyler

Gender: Female

Age:16

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality: Sky is happy and smiles a lot. She loves people with powers.

Flaws:

Power: Control over water.

Weapon: twin swords, and her transformations.
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Appearance: She has purple hair that is almost white. Her hosts brown eyes with an innocent gleam.

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History: She has a quite deadly secret: her father is the king, her mother the queen. Yes, she is a princes. She never tells anyone, because she was treated like dirt. Not even the leader knows. She tells everyone she was homeless and came here for a better life with her brother, tomix.

Other: up for love? yes
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Name: Tomix (Tom-icks)

Age: 20.

Organization:Ave Maira

Personality: He's strange. He likes to be alone, except for his sister.

Flaws:

Power:transformation. A Wolf:
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Weapon: twin swords, and her transformations.
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Weapon: The Eagle Sword, as he calls it.

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History: Skyler's sister.

Other:up for love? yes.
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 2:06 am
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Name: Kanna (KAH-na)
Note: On the streets she's called Phoenix.

Age: 20

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality: Kanna is very chill and casual about a lot of things. She is very charismatic and knows how to manipulate situations to her benefit. She seems apathetic to begin with but she's very passionate about some subjects. She's very independent, streetwise and defiant and won't listen to anyone she doesn't respect. She's very tough and can win any street fight anywhere. She's not into overly bubbly girls and doesn't take any shit from anyone.

Flaws: She doesn't have complete control over her power. It's very unpredictable and prone to random bursts. You can usually tell it's coming when her eyes turn from blue to red and heat radiates off her. When in a fight her offence is fabulous but her defence is not as good.

Power: Fire Element

Weapon: A variety of throwing weapons. While they're good offence they're terrible defence and she relies on martial arts to actually defend herself

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Appearance: She says she's 5' 3'' but probably shorter than that. She has a slender dancers build and fierce features. By the way, her clothing is fireproof.

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History: Born to a family of very religious gypsies. She burned down their wagon and set part of the woods on fire. Her parents tried burning her in a bonfire to "dispel the devil" but naturally it didn't work. They left her at the steps of the Krowe Monks for some reason and disappeared. The monks, surprised but not willing to turn the 2 year old away, raised her with the practices of fighting without causing pain, and self defence. She ran away when she was 14 after getting in a "heated" fight with a group of novices. She left half the campus burning. She fought her way through the Krowe underground and reached the top with the name "Phoenix" and a feared reputation. She was recruited by the Ave Maria when she was 15.

Other: Up for love.
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Name: Keed

Age: 22

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality: Is the strong, silent type. Likes to off people quickly and painlessly. Can take direction well, but if he's dead set against something, ain't anything in the world that'll make him do it. Sometimes he gets ticked at guys that make complete fools out of themselves by being idiots towards girls, but usually he just laughs at them, in his manly chuckle, at least. He may be a killer, but if anyone treats a girl like crap he'll blow up on them.

Flaws: Loses his cool if anyone abuses -- physically or emotionally -- a girl. His power can be hard to control, so unless he concentrates a lot, it can get out of hand. Usually he concentrates, though, so this is rare.

Power: Fire.

Weapon: Fire, and a double sided sword thing.

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Appearance: The picture (and no, I am not going to describe him for you).

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History: His dad got his mom knocked up when she was sixteen, they got married, and ever since he has abused her in every way possible. His dad's a drunkard and an idiot. Keed ran away when he was fourteen, got tracked down by the cops, brought back, and ran away again when he was sixteen. That time they didn't catch him. He ended up in a gang, though didn't drink or smoke -- he saw what it did to his dad and vowed never to reach that low. Instead he lived off of stealing and other dirty work. When he was seventeen the guy gave him the card that led him to Rengar, where he got the job as an assassin. Never looked back.

Other: Has always been skeptical on the subject of love. After seeing his parent's relationship, he's just not sure it exists. Or, if it does, he thinks that it always ends up horribly like their's did. Still, he's daring the right girl to come along and force his mind to change on him.
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Sat Sep 25, 2010 7:40 pm
SisterItaly says...



I just realised my history doesn't make any since now. Since we are all Ave Maria's *sighs* I'll change it later. And Dragon? I'm not trying to sound mean, but I don't understand your profile at all.
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 10:12 pm
Ladyofthedeathroses says...



Name: Ravena Serena Rose

Age:19

Organization: Ave Maria

Personality::She is a firm believer in freedom and free will. She is a very sweet and well mannered girl is very kind and understanding and brilliant, she is very well thought and sarcastic she isn't afraid to speak her mind she is also very sweet, funny, optimistic, sassy, bold, courageous, and a good listener. She can make friends with anyone or anything with in a few minutes. She can be childish at times . She has a very quick temper. She is very good at keeping her face a blank mask and her emotions in check.She is intelligent scary intelligent but she keeps her mouth shut a lot of the time. She has a very bad temper and she has snapped and beat the crap out of people. Sweet gentle and understanding She has a great sense of humor is a great listener and is very empathetic.

Flaws:She is very hot tempered and is not afraid to speak her mind. She broke her wrist when she was younger and every now and then it goes numb and she has to force it to move. Suffers from intense headaches.

Power: Can control Earth.

Weapon: Ebony katanas and martial arts

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Apperance:: Black hair down to her waist dark purple eyes that change color with her mood Nightshade: Pissed Violet Happy Lavender Sad

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History: She lost her family due to a house fire and now lives with her best friend Diana.

Other has a grey and black wolf named Tskinnak
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