Young Writers Society

Here's the discussion thread for our storybook. Discuss away.

I just realised that Sky and Bianca aren't doing anything. Sorry to cut your characters out of the loop like this. I don't want them to be completely forgotten, and I don't want you to think we're leaving you out, Knurla. So why don't you and Kitty have your characters be brought to the hospital and give them a little more time for bonding?

I'll be going camping again this weekend, so I won't be able to post until Sunday afternoon or Monday.

I'd like to jump to the next morning once Takeo, Lena, and Ayaka have left Ren's apartment. We need to bring Knurla and Ayumi back in.

How do you want to bring them back in? Mabye they could go to Ren's house and accidenly find the orb...just thorwing things out there...

I was actually thinking they could come across another orb in an antique shop somewhere, and then when they start getting chased we can bring them into the plot itself. Right now I'd just like for their characters to be moving around so we don't forget about them or anything. Besides, Ayumi and Knurla haven't posted anything for a while and I don't like excluding people in storybooks.

That sounds like a good idea. Now all we have to do is let them know...if that is what you want to do. And I agree, I dislike including people from storybooks too...

Good idea, orb in an antique shop sounds like a fun plot line

I was thinking one of them would buy it in the spur of the moment, then they find out what it really is later. You guys can choose which zodiac sign it will be.

I was thinking, when Bianca and Sky come across another orb in an antique shop it could be the same sign as Ren. That way when everyone else finds out about it he could start getting obseesed with that orb as well. I think the story becomes much more interesting when our characters have to fight against their own thoughts and urges as well as thair enemies.

Ren's sign is Virgo, by the way.

That would be fine by me

Cool.

Ren is going to end up skipping school today, so he won't be at the bus stop with the others.

That just gave me another idea. Cait can be brought into the plot too when she notices Ren doesn't show up for school. Knowing that it's unlike him to skip class she decides to visit him after school to see if anything was wrong. That's when she finds out about the orb as well.

Sounds like a good plan.

That's one of the reasons why I like thinking as I go while writing something instead of planning everything out ahead of time, sometimes the plot devices work themselves out. I learned my lesson about being too controlling with storybooks. The best thing to do is just figuring out the general direction of the story, then it's just a matter of getting from point A to point B.

Ren: Virgo
Ayaka: Pisces