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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:30 pm
Kelcia says...



Oooh! I just had had light bub moment! The stone grants wishes, right? What if a side effect to that is, as you get closer to it, it shows you what you want most... but then, it disappears, and you begin to wonder what's true and what isn't. However, it only happens when you're alone. In some cases, it can drive you insane. It's the Stone's way of protecting itself, and it's something neither Eighth or the Riders know about.

What do you think? They're in the Black Mountains, so it should start effecting them, mildly at first. For example, Manarian would begin to hear the beat of dragon wings, and see flying silver shapes up in the sky... ;)
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:31 pm
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Ooooohhhh. Nice idea.... What would Zara see? Her old self? Hmm...
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:37 pm
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I have no idea... It'll be interesting I'd wager.
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:39 pm
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Mm. It will be. Now, to go post in the SB! XD *goes to check said SB herself*
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:21 pm
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I was the last one to post, and I hate double-posting. Maybe you could...?
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Fri Aug 27, 2010 7:26 pm
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I posted before you. I've been waiting on whoever controls Fitz or Ryl to post.
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:16 pm
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Hmmm. True enough. So, what should we do?
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:48 pm
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I don't know...wait some more? *sighs and shakes her head* I don't know.... :\
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:26 pm
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Hang on I'm part way through writing a post so should be up by the end of the day :D

Thanks for keeping my character involved! :)
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Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:59 pm
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Nooooo problem. :D
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Mon Oct 25, 2010 10:26 pm
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Gee, this Zara-Manarian conflict.... It's kind of a Love/Hate relationship isn't it? ;)
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 1:11 am
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um... well, im new, and such... I just posted, but im not really sure about what's happening. Help?
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:53 am
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Okay. The shadow riders believe that there is a stone, the Stone of Destiny, hidden in the Black mountains. They seem to think that it will give them power to wipe out the riders entirely. The Riders, needless to say, don't want this. So, they're going out to stop them.

My character, Manarian, had his dragon killed by Scarlett's character, Zara. WhiteTiger's character, Bree, was almost killed by Dreamy's character, Eighth, head of the shadow riders. Aumi's character, Fitz, joined us, and is having a serious personality conflict with Manarian, and has some feelings of sympathy towards Zara. Oh, and Manarian hates Zara's guts.

That's all I can put right now. ;)
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:03 am
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Kelcia wrote:Gee, this Zara-Manarian conflict.... It's kind of a Love/Hate relationship isn't it? ;)


Mmh, it is, isn't it?

Poor Zara, poor Manarian. That was cruel. *thinks the stone isn't as good as it sounds*
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Wed Oct 27, 2010 8:18 pm
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Yeahh... Lol, they don't know what their in for! :D
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