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Fri Jul 25, 2014 12:00 am
Wolfi says...



Just three storybooks for me, too! @JamesHunt, that's alright! ;)
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Sat Jul 26, 2014 10:31 pm
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Cynder says...



hey @r4p17 I didn't know that happened, I'll fix it now. It must not have copied on right. Anyway, @wolfare1 I vote for option c as well. Thanks for all the input guys.
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 11:54 pm
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I AM SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG I WILL BEGIN NOW BECAUSE I FINALLY HAVE AN OPEN WINDOW OF TIME.
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Thu Jul 31, 2014 11:58 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



YOU CAN DO IT WOLFIE! (If I may go next, I am /dying/ to use Cryssi, but I don't know where to pick it up from where is left off so, hurry up Wolfie xD)
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:07 am
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@Wolfare1 do you want me to include Cryssi in my post somehow? Should she be with the dragons now or meet them later in "Reality?" (Where the monster chases her and the dragons "save" her) Or something else?
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:21 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



I think the latter one would work, since that's what we agreed on. Though if you can't include her that's alright too. I'm just kind of confused on what's going on as of the latest post.
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 2:47 am
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Cynder says...



I'm going to clarify some things for the prologue and edit it. @Wolfie36 pointed out that it's a little spotty. Sorry about that. If anyone has some recommendations, I'm open to them.
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 3:24 am
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Cynder says...



Hey @r4p17 I think you should adjust your dragons age. Dragons are usually pretty eternal creatures, especially in this setting. I do like ur character, but I think it should be a wee bit older.
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:17 am
r4p17 says...



Okay. To be honest with you I forgot he wasn't that young. :P
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 1:15 pm
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Sorry for the double post @Cynder. But I changed Thoren's age to 40. @Wolfie36 Your entry was good. I love how you portrayed Kirimbi @Kelpies
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 4:45 pm
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Wolfi says...



Thank you! :)
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 7:19 pm
r4p17 says...



So are we going to post in a specific order or are we just posting when we are ready @Cynder? I guess my question is can I post next?
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:43 pm
Kelpies says...



I think Wolfare1 wanted to go next. But I think we should arrange some sort of order. Like Wolfie36, Wolfare1, r4p17, Cynder, Me? Sorry if I forgot anyone... Just a suggestion. But I'm good with going last.
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:44 pm
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Pinkiegirl13 before me XD sorry.
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:53 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



We don't really need a specific order (because it's kind of boring waiting for someone else to post) so, @r4p17 you can post next if you want, since it might take me a bit to finish mine.
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