Young Writers Society

How will the group of dragons meet the Phoenix? I have a few suggestions, if any of them sound acceptable based on what's planned:

a) She foolishly tries to raid them for supplies while they're sleeping.
b) They meet her somewhere before they begin their journey.
c) The group saves her from something attacking her.

(Personally, I like c, but whatever works is fine by me.)

@Wolfare1 I thought that one of us was going to try and eat the Phoenix. Then after that there could be a turn of events and we become friends with it. Or we continue to chase it. .

@Cynder I read the prologue, though at some points I thought there could be some more explanation. For instance it would be nice if you used italics to identify thoughts and Mind Speech. You do that by doing [*] [*] you just remove the asterisks, replace them with i's, and put whatever you are going to write in between those two things. I hope this helps. I liked the prologue though, and will try to get my post in soon. Are we on earth yet or not?

@r4p17 yes that was planned, but they cannot try to eat the Phoenix if they never meet the Phoenix, see what I mean? When/how would they meet up with her?

I know what you mean, but if we saved the Phoenix than why would we kill it?

The monster that's chasing her could turn on the dragons? Obviously they'd demolish it and the Phoenix (being as vain as she is) would think they saved her. This she accompanies them on their journey really without their permission and eventually one could get annoyed with her an attempt to eat her.

Okay. I see what you mean now. That sounds fun. I opt for the third one too!

Character, in. This will be so fun to play

Who's going to go next?

Jeeeeeeezzzzz, Wolfare! You really worked hard on that character page... Nice job!
Cynder wants me to go next. I also have the wolf one to do, too, though, but I'll try to write one tonight.

I did my best! When I saw the mythical creatures, I instantly thought of a vain Phoenix and went from there She's a very complex character and I wanted to iron out all the details to make it easy for others to portray her. Also, are we agreed on how the group of dragons meets up with Cryssi? I'm still lost on that >.<

@Wolfare1 and @Wolfie36 - I have already joined three SB's and Wanderer is planning one of his own (with which I naturally help), so sorry! I cannot join.

Ah, sad you couldn't join, but I understand. Four SB's can be hard to juggle (let alone six) so I wish you the best of luck!

You are in six SB's

Almost seven/eight (I'm not crazy.)

Hehehe! I have like 3 storybooks that I am in not to mention the one I jut created.